Talk:Love (Inna song)/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 22:39, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing this for a review. Aoba47 (talk) 22:39, 18 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

I would replace “talk” in the phrase “Its lyrics talk about” with something else. Something like “Its lyrics revolved around”.

Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I would rephrase “how complicated situations of love can become” to “the potential complications related with love”.

Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I would move the first sentence of the second paragraph to the end of the first paragraph to group all of the information on the critical reception of the song together.

Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The references in the lead are not necessary as the information should be in the body of the article with the citation.

According to Wikipedia policies, such things can be referenced solely in the lead. Also, having is sole live performance of the song is not enough to have "Music video" converted into "Music video and promotion". Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I would change “top 10” to “top ten”.

Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Release and composition

I would remove this part “observed on 14 February.” as it is not necessary.

Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Reception and accolades

Are there any critical reviews for this song?

No, there weren't reviews of the song, like almost every other Inna song of that era, unfortunately. Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Music video

For this part “which he shwocased through "impressive" contrasts”, the word “showcased” is misspelled.

Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

For this sentence (The new video brings us a happy end in which love conquers, as we can see from the title of the single." ), you are missing the beginning quotation mark.

I think you missed something. Take a look at the whole sentences again... Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

External links

Please add the link for the music video here.

Done Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments

Good work on this. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this. Have a wonderful day or night. Aoba47 (talk) 19:35, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: I answered to your comments! THX!! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:48, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Verdict

Thank you for addressing all of my comments. I will ✓ Pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 23:34, 19 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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