Talk:Love You Better (Oh Land song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 18:00, 2 August 2017 (UTC)
- Comments
- I am not sure of the phrase "taken from" as it sounds somewhat odd to me. I would suggest revising it.
- Done
- In the phrase "It was written and produced by Oh Land" in the "Background and composition" section, it is not entirely clear what "it" is meant in this context as the previous sentence is about the album not the song.
- Done
- I am not certain about the value of the quote "it is a song that means a lot to [her]". Could you possibly be more specific about what she means by this? Otherwise, it sounds somewhat generic and does not add much to the actual article itself. If she does not say anything beyond this, then I would suggest removing the quote.
- Done
- Please attribute who described the song as "delicate, melancholy ode to wisdom and age".
- In the second paragraph of the "Background and composition" section, the following two phrases (She also described and Oh Land also discusses) and I would suggest revising to avoid the repetition of "also".
- Done
- I would move the music critics link up from the "Reception" section to this sentence (Several critics described "Love You Better" as a) in the "Background and composition" section.
- Done
- Did Kristian Levring provide any reasons for choosing to making a video for this song?
- Were there are any reviews for the music video?
- Final comment
- Wonderful work with this article. Once my relatively minor comments are addressed, I will pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 18:13, 2 August 2017 (UTC)
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