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Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Lead needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
  • Some appropriate headings present, but further organisation would be beneficial
  • Information on research should be expanded
  • Some references present, but some material unsourced
  • External links to useful online resources should be added if available

Espresso Addict 18:32, 13 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]