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GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:59, 1 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good, but remove the hidden note in the "|num_episodes" parameter.
  • The use of "The series" in the second paragraph sounds repetitive. Maybe change "The series stars" to "It stars".
  • Additionally, combine the first two paragraphs, as they seem short when separated.

Cast and characters

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  • Is there a reason why some characters have descriptions, and others don't?

Episodes

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  • Is there a reason why some characters have the name of the actors who portray them next to their names, and others don't? (I would remove them).
  • "Aubrey, Mac and Desi" → "Aubrey, Mac, and Desi"
  • "Mac to join her, but fails" → "Mac to join her but fails"
  • "super weapon" → "superweapon"

Production

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Development

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  • "claimed were not true" → "claimed was not true"
  • "CBS later decided" → "As a result, CBS later decided"

Casting

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  • Put James Murray, Sal Vulcano, Joe Gatto, and Brian Quinn in parathesis as the sentence structure makes it seem as if The Tenderloins and the group were different people.
  • Additionally, could you replace the reference after their names with something that's not a press release, such as this article from Meaww?
  • Same thing for the reference for Tate Donovan and Peter Weller. Maybe change it with this and this, since press releases really don't count as "secondary sources".

Viewing figures

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  • 6.192 rounds to 6.19, not 6.20. Please change this in this section and #Episodes.
  • "7.04" → "7.05" per this reference.
  • For only episode 8, change "1.34" to "1.35" per this reference.

References

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  • Link Mitch Metcalf in each citation using his name.
  • Try linking each website to their Wiki-articles.
  • Since it's only a part of the citation, the "Updated: ShowBuzzDaily's" part of the first 13 references can be capitalized per MOS:ALLCAPS.

Overview

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GAN table

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Notes

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@TheTVExpert: I think you forgot to change "Aubrey, Mac and Desi" to "Aubrey, Mac, and Desi" and all uses of "super weapon" to "superweapon" in #Episodes. Once you do that, ping me again, and I will promote this article. Additionally, there's one reference (currently #20) with the website parameter as just "Deadline", so change that to "Deadline Hollywood". Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 15:36, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. TheTVExpert (talk) 16:29, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]