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Requested comments

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Hello, Zena0727 asked that I come give some comments on this due to some suggestions I made during the last AfD debate. For anyone working on this article, I'd recommend you focus on:

  • Adding internal references to show what information comes from where. Along the same lines, find some online resources if possible so as to give a more accessible background.
  • Working on the prose to remove some of the non-neutrality from the article. The article is much better than it used to be and no longer reads blatantly biased or like an advertisement, but could still use a little help in the NPOV department. Note that some of that can be improved by adding the internal citations mentioned above. If it's cited somewhere, it's a little more credible.
  • Some more blue links could be nice.
  • Always look for more information about the company itself. Right now, half of the article is about the Margolis Method, which while relevant, isn't what the article is about. Try to find more information about the company, such as detailed history, notable players, common themes in their performances, etc.

If I were to assess this article as it currently stands, I'd say it would be a Start-Class article, and will indicate as such on the WikiProject Banner above. Hopefully, that banner will attract the attention of WikiProject Theatre, who should be able to provide some help with improving the article. Best of luck! Hersfold (talk/work) 14:48, 6 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Improvment

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As one of the editors who voted for deletion, I would like to say that this article has been improved deeply. James Luftan contribs 02:37, 7 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Updates/Scales

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Hello! I'd love some feedback on the page from some wiki vets. I've looked over the previous feedback/comments and tried to improve on the page given the info there.

Also I'd be curious how to up this page on Quality & Importance scales.

Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by StJustus (talkcontribs) 00:38, 18 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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