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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk00:28, 27 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Margrethe Parm in 1940
Margrethe Parm in 1940

Created by Roundtheworld and Annelingua. Nominated by Evrik (talk) at 02:45, 21 June 2022 (UTC).[reply]

  • Nice article but the hook fact doesnt appear to mention the prison's earlier use. Rather than just pointing this out I thought I'd fix that. However my first try was this source which says that the camps were bad but not in the same league as those in Germany etc. So I think we do need help here with finding a supporting source or a hook rephasing. I also thought her early involvement with Girl Scouts (ie not Girl Guides) was potentially hook. Ping me Victuallers (talk) 08:58, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Victuallers:, Yes, the link you shared does document the hook. I have added it to the article. I'm open to other hook ideas. --evrik (talk) 16:40, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
My point was that my hook and the article mention "concentration camp", there is no ref for this and "my" hook just says "prison in 1941" which is not a "Nazi concentration camp" Victuallers (talk) 18:57, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I have read the article on Nazi concentration camp .... you need a very strong ref or two or a new hook. Victuallers (talk) 20:11, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I created an Alt1 and Alt 2. --evrik (talk) 21:14, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I'm OK with Alt1 as I can clearly see the source and its the most hooky of the two IMO. Earwig agrees with me that there is no plagiarism. Lots of refs and its long and new enough. The image is a generous donation from Oslo Museum (well done them!). So Alt2 may be OK, but the tick here is for Alt1. Thank you and sorry for the delay. Victuallers (talk) 11:14, 18 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]