Talk:Maria Dunn

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Review: June 23, 2018. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 04:33, 21 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:33, 21 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 2 is dead.
- Deleted, it was in intro so not needed. Kees08 (Talk)
Any college sports info from the NAIA?
- Not that I can find, looked pretty hard. Kees08 (Talk)
"Dunn trained for the 2012 Summer Olympics with Roy Wood in the city of Wigan. She stayed with his family while practicing freestyle wrestling." Merge sentences.
- Done Kees08 (Talk)
Some pronouns should replace "Dunn" to avoid using the same word to start consecutive sentences.
- Dunn Kees08 (Talk)
"Dunn won silver at the 2002 Oceania Championships [16] and won gold at the 2007,[17] 2008,[18]and 2010 Oceania Championships.[19]" Move Ref 16 to the comma and space needed after Ref 18.
- added space, also added a comma, seems to make sense where I put it. Kees08 (Talk)
"She lost to New Zealand's Tayla Ford in the championship match." In which year?
- Done (combined sentences) Kees08 (Talk)
Newspapers.com refs should have {{free access}} templates or something similar.
- Done Kees08 (Talk)

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:10, 21 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]