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Page name

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How do you change the page name? It should read "Mariano Martinez".

Thanks,

BigInk (talk) 16:07, 20 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have renamed the article as none of the sources support him being a Jr. References: abc news, official website for Marianos Restaurants. Tiptoety talk 23:39, 2 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Encyclopedic style

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This article was written in the style of a magazine article, or a PR person's puff piece. I've made a first pass at making the language more encyclopedic. This includes things like removing irrelevant details of his personal life, calling him by his last name rather than his first, reducing unnecessary superlatives, and so on. --Macrakis (talk) 21:46, 11 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]