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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 21:05, 6 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Going to be taking a look at this article. MWright96 (talk) 21:05, 6 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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Early life and background

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  • "Markéta Vondroušová was born on 28 June 1999 to David Vondrouš and Jindřiška Anderlová in Sokolov," - Lidovky.cz doesn't specify her date of birth. But, the WTA Tennis bio source that is used in the infobox, so I suggest citation bundling
  • "Although her parents divorced when Vondroušová was three, both of her parents" - try to avoid reptition of the word parents when possible
  • Štvanice is linked twice in this section
  • "two of which were in Štvanice a few hours from her hometown." - a comma should be added before "Štvanice" and "a"
  • "During this time, she trained for five days a week, two of which were in Štvanice a few hours from her hometown." - The Tenisovysvet.cz reference does not mention how long she trained in Štvanice but the Deník.cz source does. So it would help to move the Tenisovysvet.cz citation to before this sentence and have the Deník.cz in its place

Junior career

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2014–17: Maiden WTA title at 17, top 100 debut

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2018–19: Teenage French Open finalist, world No. 14

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Playing style

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Coaches

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Personal life

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References

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  • There are several references that are lacking the authors, publication dates of the works and the names of the newspapers/websites that published them. Those will need to be included.

This article has some issues, some minor and some major. For minor issues, there are a few grammar issues and one main issue is with missing data from several of the references used in the article. Another big issue is the unverified statements, whether it be the sources not matching at all due to the incorrect one being used. Will put the review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:28, 7 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, MWright96! I addressed everything above, and agreed with most of it. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 22:43, 8 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:13, 9 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]