Talk:Mark Soyer/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 23:03, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 23:03, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "and was trying to secure a spot for the 2014 Winter Paralympics." 2014 WP can be linked, I presume an article will be made soon if not already.
- "Soyer was diagnosed leukemia and doctors" diagnosed with
- "Soyer trains at Mt Hotham" Is there a period after Mt? I'd think so but in Aus. English there might not be, so checking.
- "and in Colorado in the United States." Not sure if US is needed. Might be helpful but feels just tacked on.
- Any updates on the 2014 paralympics training besides that he's trying to earn a spot?
- "That year, Liberty Skis signed" the Liberty.
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 00:06, 28 January 2013 (UTC)