Talk:Markelle Fultz/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:32, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 20:32, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

High school career

• "all-boys college-prep private school," - I understand what this means but it should be written as "college-preparatory"
• "As a 5-foot, 9-inch sophomore," - use the convert template on 5-foot, 9-inch
• "then-assistant coach Cory McCrae said" - THE MOS discourages use of the word "then" in this case
• "he measured 6 feet, 3 inches." - same as the second point
• Wikilink MVP to Most valuable player

References

• There is no access date to Reference 15
• References 16, 17, 18, 19 & 21 are missing their author(s)
• Reference 24 is missing Associated Press as the agency

A very good article overall. Just the minor nibbles from me. MWright96 (talk) 11:52, 20 April 2018 (UTC)

MWright96 I believe I addressed the points you raised. Thank you for your compliment on the article.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 03:30, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

• • Yes, everything has been addressed correctly. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 12:36, 21 April 2018 (UTC)