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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 20:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • No DAB links checkY
  • No dead links checkY
  • No missing citations checkY

Prose Suggestions

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • The Empire's eastern border in the Caucasus was vastly expanded... suggest:
    Under him the Empire's eastern border in the Caucasus was vastly expanded...
  • He may have been a Cappadocian Greek,[3][4] or a Hellenised Armenian.[5] The issue cannot be resolved. suggest:
    Sources conflict over his birthplace, with some calling him a Cappadocian Greek, others a Hellenised Armenian; The historian Evagrius Scholasticus records a probably invented descent from old Rome.
  • In the same month Emperor Tiberius was struck down by an illness which was shortly to kill him suggest:
    In the same month Emperor Tiberius was struck down by an illness which shortly thereafter killed him.
  • @Gog the Mild: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:08, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Iazyges: Much better. Thanks. Assessing three GANs in 48 hours. That has to be some sort of record! That is, I nominated the first of the three less than 48 hours ago. Maurice took you less than 5 hours. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:28, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]