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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 14:51, 25 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Plot: "with whom she is also sleeping". Huh?
  • Changed to "with whom she is also having sex"
  • Cast: WP:MOS recommends using straight prose rather than bulleted and numbered lists where feasible. I'd look for a way to compress the cast list into several paragraphs
  • Production: Link the US dollar
  • Done, although somewhat reluctantly since US$ is fairly familiar.
  • External links: TV.com link?
Not on that site. Most Indonesian films have poor entries on the usual EL destinations, if they have them at all.
  • External links: Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order

More to come later today. TBrandley 15:02, 25 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

More comments

  • Reception: "was also screened" "also" not needed
  • Done.
  • Reception: "warm reviews". Change to something like "positive reviews"
  • Done.
  • Awards → Accolades
  • Not done. Aside from them all being awards (the Citra Award, to be precise) previous FAs like Ruma Maida and ? use the same format.
  • That's being automatically bolded by the table from having scope="row". I could remove that, but ACCESS says we need it. Which is the lesser of two evils? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:29, 28 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • Well; I'd say WP:ACCESS, since "scope=row" are important very. So, no changes needed, I suppose. Not sure.
  • References: Should be sub-sections as per MOS:ACCESS
  • Done.
  • External links: Categories still aren't sorted in alphabetical order
  • Forgot to mention this. "Indonesian language films" is hardcoded into the template. Do you know a way to override that?
    • Sorry, no. That's fine for now then.

Sorry for the wait. Your patiences was appreciated. Been a bit busy. Anyway, that's all. Cheers, TBrandley 16:26, 28 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Wow; great work. Pass. TBrandley 23:36, 28 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]