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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Mike Kullman/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 01:08, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes

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  • added philly and coach cat
  • "After being released" i dont think high schoolers get "released"
  • "third release" i wonder if theres another word we could use
    • Changed both to "cut"; sounds better to me; though I could try changing it to something else if you'd like.
  • "first-team All-Pennsylvania State Athletic Conference." "second-team selection the following year" Add to infobox
    • Added.
  • should we link minicamp
    • Linked.
  • I think we can link retainer to Retainer agreement?
    • Linked.
  • "the game, and Kullman" remove comma
    • Removed.
  • "and made nine tackles" remove made
    • Removed.
  • hes not actually german is he? Was he just born there? There is a german cat
    • Not really sure - there wasn't really much talking about that - what would you suggest?

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:16, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:31, 30 October 2023 (UTC) @BeanieFan11: Where'd you get his height of 6'2 from? NFL, PFR and PFA all say 6'1. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 13:58, 30 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]