Talk:Millennium Earl/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ISD (talk · contribs) 21:30, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there. I've spotted some things that may want to be changed before being promoted to GA status.

The image in the infobox meets the GA criteria, but you might want to use a clearer, less blurry image.
- Reuploaded. My old computer had bad lightning which made this poor quality.Tintor2 (talk) 22:16, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - Still looks blurry to me. Maybe you might be better off using an image from the manga, like the one you use to depict the character's human form. Or, it might not be a screenshot from the anime itself, it could be just a promotional image of the character. For example, see the main image to illustrate another GA nomination, Leafa. ISD (talk) 08:03, 10 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Which do you think is best User:ISD?Tintor2 (talk) 13:57, 10 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - From that page, the image in the infobox looks the best personally speaking. ISD (talk) 18:56, 10 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    - Done ISD.Tintor2 (talk) 21:00, 10 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
      - Good. ISD (talk) 08:16, 11 April 2017 (UTC) Y[reply]
Not sure if the sentence: "As in D.Gray-man, the Earl promised people their dead love ones back to life", reads quite right. Might make more sense to read: "As in D.Gray-man, the Earl promised people to return their dead love ones back to life".
- Done.Tintor2 (talk) 22:16, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - Good. ISD (talk) 08:03, 10 April 2017 (UTC) Y[reply]
The sentence: "Towards the series' beginning, Hoshino found the character as one of easiest to one alongside Hevlaska", doesn't make sense to me. Do you mean the character was one of the easiest to draw, to write for etc.? I assume it is to draw given the sentence afterwards.
- DoneTintor2 (talk) 22:16, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - Good. ISD (talk) 08:03, 10 April 2017 (UTC) Y[reply]
Again, the sentence: "When it was revealed that the Earl and the other Noah were living in the Kamelot family as a normal human", doesn't quite make sense. Should it be "normal humans" plural, or am I missing something?
- Done.Tintor2 (talk) 22:16, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - Good. ISD (talk) 08:03, 10 April 2017 (UTC) Y[reply]
The [ch. 218] reference doesn't appear to fit in with the WP:STYLE requirements. Punctuation should precede references.
- Reworded.
  - Good. ISD (talk) 08:03, 10 April 2017 (UTC) Y[reply]
The sentence: "He also noted that the character the contrast", also appears not to quite read right.
- Reworded.Tintor2 (talk) 22:16, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - Good. ISD (talk) 08:03, 10 April 2017 (UTC) Y[reply]
In "Earl's tapioca milk tea was served at the 2016 D. Gray-man Halloween Cafe in Tokyo", D. Gray-man should be in italics.
- Done.Tintor2 (talk) 22:16, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  - Good. ISD (talk) 08:03, 10 April 2017 (UTC) Y[reply]

Hope this is of some use. ISD (talk) 21:30, 9 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

As everything has been carried out I think that this is now officially a good article. Well done Tintor2. ISD (talk) 08:16, 11 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]