Talk:Ministry of Finance (Soviet Union)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk ^(talk) 11:30, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done Instead of being a see also link, mention of the Narkomfin Building should be incorporated into the text.
Done Do you write American or British English? Try to be consistent.
- Can you give any examples? --TIAYN (talk) 19:44, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  - The one that struck me was 'organization' vs. 'organisation'. British uses 's', while Oxford and American use 'z'. Both appear in the article. Its not a big deal, but consistency always makes things look more professional. Arsenikk ^(talk) 21:05, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done Please rewrite the "organization" section to prose and avoid all the bulleted lists. Use words to explain the meanings, and feel free to embroider.
Done Please take a look at the disambiguation links on the page.
Done Ref 12 (Ivkin) is dead.
(See below) Why are there page numbers in the biography section?
- Number of pages in the book, Its been a normal procedure for some time, but i can remove it. --TIAYN (talk) 19:02, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  - ops, fixed it, changed it from page to pages :) --TIAYN (talk) 19:48, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done In the notes, Huskey is noted as 1992, but no year is mentioned in the biography section.
Done Consider adding appropriate established in and disestablished in categories.

Generally looks pretty good, but I am placing the article on hold until the above is fixed. Arsenikk ^(talk) 11:30, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]