Talk:Ministry of Foreign Affairs (Soviet Union)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:42, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this article. -- Cirt (talk) 19:41, 21 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Since Cirt's busy with other matters, I will review this article, hopefully soon. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:42, 19 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

Done "From 1946 to 1991 known as Ministry of Foreign Affairs (Russian: Министерство иностранных дел), or for short, MFA." sentence fragment
Done "but the MER also represented the country abroad and participated in talks with foreign delegations on behalf of the Soviet government." not sure if 'but' is the right word choice, since both parts of the sentence seem to connect.
Done "economic interests were carried out joinly with" jointly
Done "overal Soviet consular" overall
Done "Notable goals adopted by the Collegium was" were
Done "Further, the Collegium" furthermore
Done "This joint gathering led to more participations" participation, unless you meant participants
Done "This organ also discussing" discussed
Done "there were no longer any distinction between" was
Done "structure as following:" as follows:
Done "for propaganda purposes and so-called "active measures" then other non-Soviet affiliated foreign ministries" than other
Done "and the use accusations and derogatory terminology," use of
Done "the Soviet MER, had a much higher budget than" no comma needed
Done "Andrei Gromyko notes in his memoirs," noted; make sure no present tense like that is in article.
Done "He's ideas" His ideas
Done Getting someone from WP:GOCE to copyedit this would be a bonus, since I may have missed a thing or two.

I'll put the article on hold. When the issues are fixed, I'll either pass it or request an outside copyeditor browse through the article first; that I'll sleep on. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:15, 20 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Now that the article's been copyedited, I will pass this article as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:21, 27 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]