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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 09:06, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Address the dead links
  • which features instrumentation of -- which features instrumentation from
  • The track is translated to "Future Museum" --> this should be used in the first line itself, like "Mirai No Museum" (Eng: "Future Museum")...."
  • Perfume have performed the song through live performances throughout Japan. --> Perfume have performed the song in a number of live performances throughout Japan.
  • Albums name in the infobox should be Level3 and not LEVEL3
  • Remove the first para of Background section. It has nothing to do with this album or the song
  • Correct the composition part. It is not clear whether you are sometimes talking about the album and sometimes about the single
  • "breaks the musical delivery."[9] He labelled it the "one true issue on the album."[9] --> consecutive appearances of FN9 not needed, only one referencing at the end of the quote is enough. And the end-quote symbol should be inside the period.
  • Please correct the issue about the endquotes through out the article
  • and said it was "painfully out of place." --> and felt it was "painfully out of place."
  • which did not feature on the album ---> which was not feature on the album
  • FN 11, you do not need to specify Unknown author
  • The track also peaked at two on Japan's Hot 100 chart ---> The wikilink for Hot 100 should be Japan Hot 100
  • The song was certified gold by RIAJ for shipments of ---> The song was certified gold by the Recording Industry Association of Japan (RIAJ) for shipments of
  • on 27 February of that year ---> Which year?
  • "Mirai no Museum" was used as the ending theme song for the film Doraemon: Nobita no Himitsu Dogu Museum ---> Mention in the end which year the film came out to give perspective
  • performed the track through live performance --> remove live performance, redundant
  • premiered on Perfume's youtube channel --> premiered on Perfume's YouTube channel
  • It depicts Perfume inside a comic book-theme world, trying to defeat the heavily armored warrior from the comic world. They are accompanied by a mysterious mascot man, who trys to hide away from the warrior when it attacks.[26] The video is the groups twelfth highest viewed music video on Youtube as of April 2015. --> Rephrase and remove the part about 12th highest video, has no significance
  • Use en-dash in the credits section
  • Mention the length of the track list in the respective section
  • Use rowheader for the charts and the {{Certification Table Entry}} for the certification
  • Use rowheader for release history
  • The notes part is unreferenced.
  • Use en-dash in all the reference titles using a normal dash
  • Add catalogue no. for all the templates using {{cite AV media}}

On hold for seven days. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 14:59, 4 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@IndianBio: Done. Finished all adjustments, grammar, correcting, etc. above. GirlsAlouud (talk · contribs} 05:50, 5 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
You havent used scope="row" in the tables GirlsAlouud. —Indian:BIO [ ChitChat ] 05:52, 5 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@IndianBio: Oops, missed that. Fixed those on Charts and Release history, along with changing the Certification table. Not sure about the "Japan" layout on the Release table though.