The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Antiguan politician Molwyn Joseph, dismissed from the government after allegations of impropriety, was reappointed to the Cabinet after less than two years?
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"Minister without Portfolio is a quasi-formal title, signifying a government minister appointed to the Cabinet under the Westminster system but not given a specific platform or department. Ironholds (talk) 10:00, 14 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Good to know
Why is ""fiscal reforms"" in quotes?
No real justification; now removed.Ironholds (talk) 10:00, 14 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Tim Hector, the leader of the opposition and editor of a major Antiguan newspaper calling for Joseph's dismissal, and further insisting that the car was actually for Joseph himself.[7]" - incomplete sentence
For example "ANTIGUA/BARBUDA-POLITICS: GOVERNMENT FIGHTING CORRUPTION CHARGES" or "CARIBBEAN: ANTIGUA'S NEW CABINET IS SWORN IN". I would change to normal typeface per WP:SHOUTING
Aha, got it. Fixed :). Ironholds (talk) 20:07, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: A few issues should be fixed, otherwise the article is well-researched and written.
Pass/Fail:
I don't see any changes? You may have forgotten to save your edits. Now I am not sure why you point me to this discussion... Also if you look more carefully at the references, you will clearly see the capitalisation and the inconsistent date formats...--GoPTCN 08:33, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Huh; looks like you're right :S. My session must have timed out or something. I can't see any mdy/dmy problems in the references; all the references seem to use mdy from what I can see. If you mean the fact that references use mdy and the article dmy; the article is on a Commonwealth subject, and so dmy is most appropriate. Whoever wrote the citation toolbar and associated templates is clearly an American, and so those automatically format as mdy. All article dates seem consistently formatted with each other, and all reference dates seem consistently formatted with each other (unless you can point out one I've missed). Ironholds (talk) 19:24, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
No problems. I responded to some of your comments. It is very near to be promoted, just some small nitpicks. .--GoPTCN 19:54, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Great! Addressed the remaining concerns :). Ironholds (talk) 20:07, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 