Talk:Monarchy of the United Kingdom/Archive 4
Out of place statement?
[edit]Maybe it's just me but I fail to see the relevance of the last statement in this list to the "Constitutional role" section:
"Thus the acts of state done in the name of the Crown, such as Crown Appointments,[7] and even if personally performed by the Monarch, such as the Queen's Speech and the State Opening of Parliament, depend upon decisions made elsewhere:
- Legislative power is exercised by the Crown in Parliament, by and with the advice and consent of Parliament, the House of Lords and the House of Commons.
- Executive power is exercised by H.M. Government, which comprises Her Majesty's Ministers, primarily the Prime Minister and the Cabinet. They have the direction of the Armed Forces of the Crown, Her Majesty's Civil Service and other Crown Servants such as the Diplomatic and Secret Services (the Queen receives certain foreign intelligence reports before the Prime Minister does[8]).
- Judicial power is vested in H.M. Judges, who by constitution and statute[9] have judicial independence of the Government
- The Church of England, of which the Monarch is the head, has its own legislative, judicial and executive structures.
- Powers independent of government are legally granted to other public bodies by statute or statutory instrument such as an Order-in-Council, Royal Commission or otherwise.
- Apart from members of parliament and local authorities, no public officers are elected."
I'm not seeing how that last statement fits in with what powers are delegated from the Queen to others. What is this trying to say? Ltwin (talk) 20:05, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
Restrictions by Gender and Religion: Review
[edit]Please provide Wiki users the courtesy of explaining your deletorious behaviour! Private and Confidential (talk) 10:29, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- Cool it. I think its excessive for the lede, I am open to slightly better worded text in the main body. If your edit is reverted you should not edit war, but instead propose the change here so that other editors can get involved —Preceding unsigned comment added by Snowded (talk • contribs) 11:31, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- I am perfectly cool, Snowded! I do not need "commands" from you..let's start.
- I humbly advocate the following to be inserted appropriately:
- The head of the Roman Catholic Church in England and Wales, Cardinal Cormac Murphy-O'Connor, said under the Act's terms, Prince William "can marry by law a Hindu, a Buddhist, anyone, but not a Roman Catholic" and still be king. The relevant part of the Act states: "That all and every person and persons, who shall or may take or inherit the said Crown, by virtue of the limitation of this present act, and is, are or shall be reconciled to, or shall hold communion with, the See or Church of Rome, or shall profess the popish religion, or shall marry a papist, shall be subject to such incapacities." [1] Private and Confidential (talk) 10:36, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- Use words like "deletorious" and you will frequently be asked to cool it. While I am at it please read WP:INDENT, I've done it for you above. Where do you want to insert that text? I'm happy with it although I don't think we need to quote the full act. --Snowded TALK 10:39, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- The wording is still excessive: a pronouncement from one Archbishop of Westminster in a general article covering the whole concept of monarchy in the United Kingdom seems to fall into the WP:RECENT and WP:UNDUE pitfalls and shouldn't be included.--Old Moonraker (talk) 10:46, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- Use words like "deletorious" and you will frequently be asked to cool it. While I am at it please read WP:INDENT, I've done it for you above. Where do you want to insert that text? I'm happy with it although I don't think we need to quote the full act. --Snowded TALK 10:39, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for indentation, Snowded. Welcome to further editors. This is good, if I may, Moonraker but let's call it what it is, please. It is a statement of the law as currently pertains in the UK, quoted with the BBC, hardly a pronouncement, and its purpose is to refer to relevant practical implications for current concerns with "Succession". I have no real objection to the point remaining but we not crediting the Archbishop for it since I am not sure he is the originator of the point. However, I defend the point's importance for relevancy to the article and I suggest the article is weaker without it.
- I advocate inserting the text after this entry:
- Roman Catholics and spouses of Roman Catholics are prohibited from succeeding.[2][3][4] Private and Confidential (talk) 11:00, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- How about
- "Roman Catholics are prohibited from succeeding to the thrown, and if a member of Royal family marries a Catholic then they are removed from the line of succession. This has caused resentment, the Archbishop of Westminster stating Prince William "can marry by law a Hindu, a Buddhist, anyone, but not a Roman Catholic" and still be king."
- I think that is balanced and not excessive. It is important in understanding the monarchy--Snowded TALK 11:06, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- The discussion in this article of this subject should only be brief, because Wikipedia:Manual of Style (summary style) applies to this article. The detail is given in two other articles: Act of Settlement 1701 and Succession to the British throne. I'm also not keen on "this has caused resentment" because it hasn't caused resentment in any actual member of the royal family or the public at large since about 1807. DrKay (talk) 11:30, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- It causes resentment in the Catholic community so its worth of inclusion, and it is a hang over which a lot of international readers will not be aware. I have made it brief - any alternative suggestions? --Snowded TALK 11:35, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- You know when members of the royal family feel resentment do you good Doctor..!?
- Let's be clear. I don't think talk of resentment is helpful, if indeed it does exist among people whatever their beliefs. This is new and pertinent factual information, sorced from the BBC, to strengthen this article. It's addition is designed to raise the level of knowldege around this part of the article, I suggest it is not complete without it and it is not mentioned elsewhere in the article. So in the interests of factual accuracy and balance let's work out how to include it in a way that serves Wiki users. Private and Confidential (talk) 11:44, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- On the first sentence of Snowded's draft, the article already says that Catholics were and are still excluded. I don't see why we should repeat the same point.
- On the second sentence of Snowded's draft, it would need to say who resented it if placed in the article.
- On P&C's draft, it is unnecessary to quote the act in a summary article. DrKay (talk) 11:54, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- OK so lets add the Archbishops comment (its pretty obvious who resents it) into the section "Restrictions by gender and religion" --Snowded TALK 11:57, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- Let's call it what it is, please. The comment is a statement of the law as currently pertains in the UK, quoted with the BBC, and its purpose is to refer to relevant practical implications for current concerns with "Succession". Any perceived "resentment" is yours.I think it is useful and worthy of Wiki users to include the text as I penned it. The comment is made today in our modern, multi-denominational society and refers to a point of contemporary legal statute, which is relevant to this article and subject: that only one section of the community, it happens to be Catholics, and no other on the grounds of religion is excluded by this Act of 1701.
- Please consider appropriate wording modifications.
- Private and Confidential (talk) 12:32, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- OK so lets add the Archbishops comment (its pretty obvious who resents it) into the section "Restrictions by gender and religion" --Snowded TALK 11:57, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- It causes resentment in the Catholic community so its worth of inclusion, and it is a hang over which a lot of international readers will not be aware. I have made it brief - any alternative suggestions? --Snowded TALK 11:35, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- The discussion in this article of this subject should only be brief, because Wikipedia:Manual of Style (summary style) applies to this article. The detail is given in two other articles: Act of Settlement 1701 and Succession to the British throne. I'm also not keen on "this has caused resentment" because it hasn't caused resentment in any actual member of the royal family or the public at large since about 1807. DrKay (talk) 11:30, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- How about
It is a wider issue though. Only practising Protestants in communion with the Church of England can inherit. Jews, Muslims, Hindus, etc, are all excluded from succession not just Catholics. The provision that the Archbishop is talking about is only about the marriage of Protestants to people of other religions, where the only excluded religion is Catholicism. Perhaps the sentence "Roman Catholics and spouses of Roman Catholics are prohibited from succeeding." should be "Protestants married to practitioners of other faiths are not excluded, unless their spouse is a Roman Catholic." The preceding sentence already says that Catholics (and all other religions except Anglicanism) are excluded. This has slipped by without comment before because it's not much of an issue, and hasn't actually affected the succession in any way because everyone's forgotten the last time a non-Protestant married into the direct line of succession. Presumably Philip wasn't legally obliged to convert from Greek Orthodoxy, though his article tells us that he did anyway. Given the wider restriction against all religions except Anglicanism, why then focus on a complaint about a specific religion? Isn't the debate (if there is any, as I think most people are agreed) about whether to remove all the restrictions, not just the restriction against marrying a Catholic? DrKay (talk) 12:44, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- Umm, but it is the case that the English Monarchy is (post the "Glorious" revolution) in part defined by anti-catholicism so it is significant --Snowded TALK 12:48, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- Historically, of course, but I'm asking about the modern debate, which the new material attempts to address. Is it focused on the marriage to Catholics by royals in the line of succession or is it actually about disestablishment and religious equality? DrKay (talk) 13:12, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- The new material is relevant to knowledge about "Restrictions by gender and religion" which occur in the UK Monarchy hence its place within this article. If you wish to widen the debate to the benefit of users, I, for one, look forward to your contribution.. Private and Confidential (talk) 13:28, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- ...so it appears no widening of the debate yet...are we edging any closer to a form of wording that resonates as fit-for-purpose with interested parties? Inactivity is unhealthy..so your views in a timely fashion please.Private and Confidential (talk) 18:13, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- Historically, of course, but I'm asking about the modern debate, which the new material attempts to address. Is it focused on the marriage to Catholics by royals in the line of succession or is it actually about disestablishment and religious equality? DrKay (talk) 13:12, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- Exclusion of professed Roman Catholics under the Act of Settlement is different from exclusion of those who are neither protestant nor Roman Catholic. Catholics are excluded "forever"; anyone else would have the opportunity to declare themselves a protestant, conform to the Church of England, and take the throne. Notice that George I was not an Anglican on August 1, 1714. john k (talk) 18:47, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- I'm still not convinced that this section merits expansion, particularly with the proposed wording. There is no organised campaign for reform; there are no plans for reform; there is no public debate on reform. The report quoted by P&C is from 2007 and implies that Cardinal Murphy-O'Connor is pro-reform. More recent reports say otherwise, e.g. "Cardinal Cormac Murphy-O’Connor and Bishop Kieran Conry of Arundel and Brighton, have said they do not think it is a major issue for most Catholics."[1] DrKay (talk) 20:51, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- I don't think it's a major issue for anyone, Catholic or not, probably because few people are aware of or understand the restrictions in the succession laws, or even have a great interest in the monarchy in general. Nevertheless, that does not make the issue any less notable. Gazzster (talk) 22:13, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- The exclusion is covered in the article. The question is over whether the current coverage should be expanded to include an unrepresentative out-of-date report and a quote from the Act. I still don't see any good arguments for either one. DrKay (talk) 07:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- My view is non-different from the view stated by an earlier editor in this discussion, John Kenney: "Exclusion of professed Roman Catholics under the Act of Settlement is different from exclusion of those who are neither protestant nor Roman Catholic." This is a fact which is communicated by the, one sentence, current day comment on this I suggest we include. I find I agree with Gazzster: this is not a major issue but it is notable: and so I recommend that it deserves a fair, precise, well-sourced and comprehensive treatment in the article. My contribution (sourced from recent BBC coverage) moves in this direction towards fuller understanding. I suggest, after the current day comment, we include the relevant actual wording of the Act - one sentence albeit a somewhat lengthy one - because it is just that: the actual relevant words of the Act from 1701. I don't see the drama in this perhaps others do. My view is that this article is markedly improved through raising/sharing relevant material, by including these two sentences, to increase knowledge among Wiki users. Further thoughts from editors please..Private and Confidential (talk) 15:45, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- My evidence is sourced from more recent coverage in the Catholic press, and shows that the one sentence quote is not representative of either Catholic opinion or Cardinal Murphy-O'Connor's opinion. Per policy at WP:UNDUE, articles are weakened not strengthened when material is weighted towards an unrepresentative view, which even the quoted authority no longer appears to hold. DrKay (talk) 20:14, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- ...can we get some more views on this..please..I really don't want to get into an "evidence" discussion where there isn't one..but in the interests of making some progress on this:here goes, briefly. The view the Cardinal expressed in 2007 with the BBC is not contradicted by his saying, before, at the same time or after that this is not a major issue for Catholics. Change to the Act of Settlement is not a major issue for most if not all people, including Catholics, apart from it would seem the very few like the good Doctor for whom this appears strangely motivating. The Cardinal's view is not "unrepresentative" Dr. He is voicing UK LEGAL FACT, held to a person uniformly throughout the entire UK legal profession that: Prince William "can marry by law a Hindu, a Buddhist, anyone, but not a Roman Catholic" and still be king." If you are going to get into an evidence based validation for your objection to my right to pursue a factual strengthening of this article, Dr , then I think you might do better than assuming one quote is going to do it. But if you do then think one quote works you might try to pick one that actually does what you claim: a quote that says he withdraws his observation that Prince William "can marry by law a Hindu, a Buddhist, anyone, but not a Roman Catholic" and still be king." No such statement exists and the reason is obvious. Since the law has not changed since he made the statement with the BBC in 2007 it follows that it would be absurd for he or anyone else for that matter to deny that Prince William "can marry by law a Hindu, a Buddhist, anyone, but not a Roman Catholic" and still be king." since it was then and is now a binding LEGAL FACT. This comment is as representative of mainstream opinion as it is possible to be since it is an unequivocal statement of UK statutory law. It is an impossibility in this case for policy at WP:UNDUE, articles are weakened not strengthened when material is weighted towards an unrepresentative view, which even the quoted authority no longer appears to hold. to be relevant to this discussion. I do not want to get sidetracked in these sorts of clarifications. Perhaps I can make a suggestion. I sense that the real problem may be that it is the Head of the Catholic Church in the UK who has made the statement. Perhaps some industrious and talented Wiki editor can find the same point made by a Chief Rabbi, a High Court Judge, an Attorney General. Someone in authority who can equally well state the simple truth. We can include their words. People, please..let's come together to agree a form of words so Wiki users don't have to be kept in the dark on what I expected would be a clearly sensible and uncontroversial insert via the BBC, based as it is in both sentences on LEGAL FACT. Over to Wiki users..Private and Confidential (talk) 23:14, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- On a matter of fact, the Cardinal did not say that in 2007 or give an interview to the BBC. The article states that the Cardinal's comment was "In the past.."
- On the matter of the quote from the Cardinal: as I have already said, the problem is that it implies he is pro-reform. That is an unfair implication.
- On the matter of a non-Catholic source for a similar quote, there is already one: the Act itself.
- On the matter of inclusion of a quote from the act: the article already states that heirs married to Catholics are excluded. There is no need to repeat the same point; it is already covered. Articles should not repeat material unnecessarily. DrKay (talk) 07:38, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
- ...can we get some more views on this..please..I really don't want to get into an "evidence" discussion where there isn't one..but in the interests of making some progress on this:here goes, briefly. The view the Cardinal expressed in 2007 with the BBC is not contradicted by his saying, before, at the same time or after that this is not a major issue for Catholics. Change to the Act of Settlement is not a major issue for most if not all people, including Catholics, apart from it would seem the very few like the good Doctor for whom this appears strangely motivating. The Cardinal's view is not "unrepresentative" Dr. He is voicing UK LEGAL FACT, held to a person uniformly throughout the entire UK legal profession that: Prince William "can marry by law a Hindu, a Buddhist, anyone, but not a Roman Catholic" and still be king." If you are going to get into an evidence based validation for your objection to my right to pursue a factual strengthening of this article, Dr , then I think you might do better than assuming one quote is going to do it. But if you do then think one quote works you might try to pick one that actually does what you claim: a quote that says he withdraws his observation that Prince William "can marry by law a Hindu, a Buddhist, anyone, but not a Roman Catholic" and still be king." No such statement exists and the reason is obvious. Since the law has not changed since he made the statement with the BBC in 2007 it follows that it would be absurd for he or anyone else for that matter to deny that Prince William "can marry by law a Hindu, a Buddhist, anyone, but not a Roman Catholic" and still be king." since it was then and is now a binding LEGAL FACT. This comment is as representative of mainstream opinion as it is possible to be since it is an unequivocal statement of UK statutory law. It is an impossibility in this case for policy at WP:UNDUE, articles are weakened not strengthened when material is weighted towards an unrepresentative view, which even the quoted authority no longer appears to hold. to be relevant to this discussion. I do not want to get sidetracked in these sorts of clarifications. Perhaps I can make a suggestion. I sense that the real problem may be that it is the Head of the Catholic Church in the UK who has made the statement. Perhaps some industrious and talented Wiki editor can find the same point made by a Chief Rabbi, a High Court Judge, an Attorney General. Someone in authority who can equally well state the simple truth. We can include their words. People, please..let's come together to agree a form of words so Wiki users don't have to be kept in the dark on what I expected would be a clearly sensible and uncontroversial insert via the BBC, based as it is in both sentences on LEGAL FACT. Over to Wiki users..Private and Confidential (talk) 23:14, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- My evidence is sourced from more recent coverage in the Catholic press, and shows that the one sentence quote is not representative of either Catholic opinion or Cardinal Murphy-O'Connor's opinion. Per policy at WP:UNDUE, articles are weakened not strengthened when material is weighted towards an unrepresentative view, which even the quoted authority no longer appears to hold. DrKay (talk) 20:14, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- My view is non-different from the view stated by an earlier editor in this discussion, John Kenney: "Exclusion of professed Roman Catholics under the Act of Settlement is different from exclusion of those who are neither protestant nor Roman Catholic." This is a fact which is communicated by the, one sentence, current day comment on this I suggest we include. I find I agree with Gazzster: this is not a major issue but it is notable: and so I recommend that it deserves a fair, precise, well-sourced and comprehensive treatment in the article. My contribution (sourced from recent BBC coverage) moves in this direction towards fuller understanding. I suggest, after the current day comment, we include the relevant actual wording of the Act - one sentence albeit a somewhat lengthy one - because it is just that: the actual relevant words of the Act from 1701. I don't see the drama in this perhaps others do. My view is that this article is markedly improved through raising/sharing relevant material, by including these two sentences, to increase knowledge among Wiki users. Further thoughts from editors please..Private and Confidential (talk) 15:45, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- The exclusion is covered in the article. The question is over whether the current coverage should be expanded to include an unrepresentative out-of-date report and a quote from the Act. I still don't see any good arguments for either one. DrKay (talk) 07:23, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- I don't think it's a major issue for anyone, Catholic or not, probably because few people are aware of or understand the restrictions in the succession laws, or even have a great interest in the monarchy in general. Nevertheless, that does not make the issue any less notable. Gazzster (talk) 22:13, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- I'm still not convinced that this section merits expansion, particularly with the proposed wording. There is no organised campaign for reform; there are no plans for reform; there is no public debate on reform. The report quoted by P&C is from 2007 and implies that Cardinal Murphy-O'Connor is pro-reform. More recent reports say otherwise, e.g. "Cardinal Cormac Murphy-O’Connor and Bishop Kieran Conry of Arundel and Brighton, have said they do not think it is a major issue for most Catholics."[1] DrKay (talk) 20:51, 27 July 2010 (UTC)
- P&C - I don't think you are getting enough support at the moment to indicate that a change is likely. I don't think its valid to argue that the issue is a lack of concern to the population as I expect that is true of large parts of this article. The question related to what is relevant in the context of the article itself. At the moment I think it is unbalanced as it treats the exclusion of catholics as an incidental matter. It has been subject over the years to riots, the odd constitutional crisis (as recently as Prince Charles when it was rumored that he might marry a catholic). I think there needs to be a sentence or two that reflects that, maybe not the quote from the Cardinal (although the fact it is 2007 is not important, there are many older items in comparable pages on the wikipedia)--Snowded TALK 08:23, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
- Ok Dr let's play. Our Doctor informs us:
- (1)(his words:)On a matter of fact, the Cardinal did not say that in 2007 or give an interview to the BBC. The article states that the Cardinal's comment was "In the past.." Mmmm. Not only has our Doctor claimed earlier in this discussion to know the feelings of members of the Royal Family past and present (since 1807, Doctor I think you said) He now tells us that he knows what a Cardinal said and did not say in 2007. Quite the capable fellow. He further tells us the Cardinal did not give an interview to the BBC when the BBC Archive Department will tell you otherwise. For the record, I have not said this comment on this occasion was sourced from an interview conducted between the Cardinal and the BBC. The reference I included is from within a BBC article, found here: http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/northern_ireland/6275011.stm
- (2)(his words:)On the matter of the quote from the Cardinal: as I have already said, the problem is that it implies he is pro-reform. That is an unfair implication. Mmmm. Any implications you have identified from the comment are yours. I agree it is an unfair implication: made repeatedly by you. The actual comment is only a statement of the legal reality: nothing more.
- (3)(his words:)On the matter of a non-Catholic source for a similar quote, there is already one: the Act itself. Mmmm. So let's include the line from the Act..!!??
- (4)(his words:)On the matter of inclusion of a quote from the act: the article already states that heirs married to Catholics are excluded. There is no need to repeat the same point; it is already covered. Articles should not repeat material unnecessarily. Mmmm. So now a line in the text is better than the original in the Act..(?)Wikipedia is an Encyclopedia where the most acccurate, factual sources are considered valued above others. I will hope, for Wiki sake, to hear better objections than these. Can we open this up..it is healthier if we have many contributions to this discussion.
- Snowded, hello. I don't agree with your analysis. Editors here have made useful contributions, among them notably Gazzster and john k. which seemed to indicate support for a form of words WHICH WE ARE MEANT TO BE ARRIVING AT..(no more sidetracking please)Furthermore the UK Monarchy article is not a history paper. The Monarchy is a feature of our current lived experience so let's look at the article from this perspective as well as the history. My points are to provide fuller knowledge for Wiki users and are LEGAL FACTS not historical opinion. Good to see you back in this discussion. More contributing editors please. Private and Confidential (talk) 09:00, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
- P&C - I don't think you are getting enough support at the moment to indicate that a change is likely. I don't think its valid to argue that the issue is a lack of concern to the population as I expect that is true of large parts of this article. The question related to what is relevant in the context of the article itself. At the moment I think it is unbalanced as it treats the exclusion of catholics as an incidental matter. It has been subject over the years to riots, the odd constitutional crisis (as recently as Prince Charles when it was rumored that he might marry a catholic). I think there needs to be a sentence or two that reflects that, maybe not the quote from the Cardinal (although the fact it is 2007 is not important, there are many older items in comparable pages on the wikipedia)--Snowded TALK 08:23, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
- I think it makes sense that a note about the exclusion provisions of the succession laws should be accompanied by a comment by the highest ranking Catholic in the United Kingdom. You would expect him to comment. But standing alone, it might seem that it is a concern only for Catholics. So perhaps we should include some well-chosen quotes from other notable persons. Didn't Gordon Brown recently make some comment? And haven't private bills been introduced to change the laws? Has anybody tried to go to the EU with human rights concerns?Gazzster (talk) 21:39, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
- How many times must it be said: these points are already covered in the daughter articles. See Act of Settlement 1701#Present debate and Succession to the British throne#Changes. The section in this article is a summary of those articles. DrKay (talk) 07:57, 30 July 2010 (UTC)
- This article within this subject is not beyond improving: it is appropriate to the spirit and the usability of Wikipedia that we seek to identify where improvements can be made for Wiki users..I don't agree with the Dr.: The section in this article is a summary of those articles, [see previous entry in this discussion]. It isn't. Or at least I think it should be better than that, more than just a summary of material in daughter articles. It is its own article under its own title. I think if we allow it to be reduced to just a summary that tends to be quite a weak approach to information building within an article. A balance must be found where useful relevant data is accessible within the article relevant to its title. Information made available to Wiki users at the point at which they may expect to find it without having to be required to search daughter articles, makes sense, I suggest. Let's seek to be disciplined in what we include, I respect the line Gazzster takes towards fuller understanding. I suggest the article is too weak to be fit-for-purpose as it is now. It simply does not succeed in informing Wiki users about Restrictions by Gender and Religion in the Uk Monarchy adequately. We should strengthen it in its accuracy and relevancy to its title...more contributions on this from editors very welcome...Private and Confidential (talk) 11:12, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
- I have not been following this debate and not read through all of the comments here. What i do not understand is the problem with the present wording? It mentions in the introduction that Roman Catholics are excluded still, the section on succession also covers it. Where is the problem? This article is also a Featured article so others must think it was fit for purpose. BritishWatcher (talk) 11:19, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
- BritishWatcher, welcome to this discussion. I hope you will have, by now, given yourself/had someone help you with the appropriate care and time required to exercise the courtesy of reading the comments of editors who have made contributions to this discussion so far. If so, you will have traced the genesis of this discussion taking place and you will be aware that we are discussing a review of a section of this article. More precisely, what is being discussed is a form of words to be included in a sensible way which serves Wikiusers better in their quest for knowledge/understanding of an aspect of reality relating to the Uk monarchy...in the hope of making useful progress...any other views...from anyone...Private and Confidential (talk) 13:16, 13 August 2010 (UTC)
- I have not been following this debate and not read through all of the comments here. What i do not understand is the problem with the present wording? It mentions in the introduction that Roman Catholics are excluded still, the section on succession also covers it. Where is the problem? This article is also a Featured article so others must think it was fit for purpose. BritishWatcher (talk) 11:19, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
- This article within this subject is not beyond improving: it is appropriate to the spirit and the usability of Wikipedia that we seek to identify where improvements can be made for Wiki users..I don't agree with the Dr.: The section in this article is a summary of those articles, [see previous entry in this discussion]. It isn't. Or at least I think it should be better than that, more than just a summary of material in daughter articles. It is its own article under its own title. I think if we allow it to be reduced to just a summary that tends to be quite a weak approach to information building within an article. A balance must be found where useful relevant data is accessible within the article relevant to its title. Information made available to Wiki users at the point at which they may expect to find it without having to be required to search daughter articles, makes sense, I suggest. Let's seek to be disciplined in what we include, I respect the line Gazzster takes towards fuller understanding. I suggest the article is too weak to be fit-for-purpose as it is now. It simply does not succeed in informing Wiki users about Restrictions by Gender and Religion in the Uk Monarchy adequately. We should strengthen it in its accuracy and relevancy to its title...more contributions on this from editors very welcome...Private and Confidential (talk) 11:12, 1 August 2010 (UTC)
- How many times must it be said: these points are already covered in the daughter articles. See Act of Settlement 1701#Present debate and Succession to the British throne#Changes. The section in this article is a summary of those articles. DrKay (talk) 07:57, 30 July 2010 (UTC)
- Well P&C I read through the discussion (wasted 10 minutes of my life) and I'm still struggling to grasp what the problem is. Please see WP:SUMMARY as it seems you don't understand that this this is a feature of Wikipedia. Ltwin (talk) 20:30, 13 August 2010 (UTC)
- I am looking for concrete, reasoned arguments for preventing inclusion of this detail. My case is that Wiki users benefit more from the two line adjustment I advocate than the current form. The line from the cardinal is relevant as is the line from the Act: both are well sourced and more accurate than the current wording and so strengthen knowledge within the article. I am going to open this up to suggestions as the article remains weak/improvable in this point and then it should move on for consideration to the next level in the interests of Wiki users who value better information over worse Private and Confidential (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 15:50, 23 August 2010 (UTC).
- Looks like this argument has indeed moved on for consideration to the next level, P&C! This arcane law which so many sensible folk have known to be absurd for so long is becoming fit for the modern world. No gender bias against females succeeding and no religious bias against marriage to Catholics. Correction passed unanimously by all Commonwealth Heads of State. Happy to see this wiki article is now accurately updated and fit for purpose too. Bravo!Equitytriumphs (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 13:53, 28 October 2011 (UTC).
- I am looking for concrete, reasoned arguments for preventing inclusion of this detail. My case is that Wiki users benefit more from the two line adjustment I advocate than the current form. The line from the cardinal is relevant as is the line from the Act: both are well sourced and more accurate than the current wording and so strengthen knowledge within the article. I am going to open this up to suggestions as the article remains weak/improvable in this point and then it should move on for consideration to the next level in the interests of Wiki users who value better information over worse Private and Confidential (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 15:50, 23 August 2010 (UTC).
- Well P&C I read through the discussion (wasted 10 minutes of my life) and I'm still struggling to grasp what the problem is. Please see WP:SUMMARY as it seems you don't understand that this this is a feature of Wikipedia. Ltwin (talk) 20:30, 13 August 2010 (UTC)
The republican Commonwealth of England
[edit]The current wording:
- "the tradition of monarchy was broken by the republican Commonwealth of England"
seems a rather coy description of the regicide -- which rather cuttingly ended the debate over the divine right of kings -- and "republican Commonwealth" was described otherwise by W.C as:
- "the triumph of some twenty thousand resolute, ruthless, disciplined, military fanatics ..."
I think the sentence carries a simplistic point of view and glosses over one of the most influential periods in formulating the current position of the Monarchy in the UK constitution. -- PBS (talk) 11:44, 1 November 2010 (UTC)
Wealth of the Crown
[edit]No-one really knows what this is. The jewels I have heard valued at £2billion, the art the same. But the real, huge value is in the land, especially the land abroad. According to an American friend of mine the Crown one on the biggest landowners on the island of Manhattan. The rent from that must be very substantial. Also, on last night's Channel 4 news it was said that of the 20 biggest tax havens in the world the Crown owns 14. Again the income form these must very considerable as tax havens for the super-rich to dodge tax can't come cheap. Obviously none of this is good enough for an encyclopedia but I may try and do some digging. If any other editors are interested in this please leave me a message. SmokeyTheCat 13:12, 29 April 2011 (UTC)
- Sorry, but most of what you've just written is wrong. David (talk) 16:51, 11 September 2011 (UTC)
- The idea that the Queen personally or through the Crown Estate owns parts of Manhatten comes up on the internet or the newspapers every so often but with no evidence to back it up in fact I remember reading a statement a few years ago from Buckingham Palace stating that the Queen does not in any way own property outside the UK. Penrithguy (talk) 18:54, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
Republican Tone
[edit]This article tries to minimise the role of Her Majesty, saying that she has nothing to say or do and all is done in her name. That is not true. The Queen HAS actual powers and she performs crucial tasks on government, parliament and civil life. Anyone who reads this article would think the monarchy is just a formality and not working state institution. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 190.28.159.202 (talk) 19:16, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- There's a difference between the formal (de jure) and the actual powers (de facto) of the Crown. The contents of the article are not principally intended; nota bene, as arguments for or against either monarchists or republicans; but as an accurate description how the Crown, and the Monarch in person, functions within the framework of the unwritten UK constitutional framework. This not a controversial position among scholars of political science and constitutional law. RicJac (talk) 14:23, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
- There is some disagreement with respect to the de facto powers of the monarch in the present day. For a recent discussion see http://www.guardian.co.uk/uk/2013/jan/14/secret-papers-royals-veto-bills? wherein the Guardian discusses use of the royal veto. Tresmegistus (talk) 22:37, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
- Bit rich to use the Guardian as a source, noting its explicitly stated stance in favour of a Republic.
United Kingdom article
[edit]Could editors please join in the discussion relating to the monarch's role, powers, etc, for the United Kingdom article.
Thanks. David (talk) 10:44, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
Few adjustments to Monarchy of Ireland and the top text and the infobox
[edit]I clarified the names and royal titles adopted for the UK and the King in 1927. I also changed the infobox that suggested the UK began in 1707 with Queen Anne. That was the Kingdom of Great Britain 1707-1801. The term UK was officially introduced with the Act of Union of 1801. I also made clear that those married to Catholics were not necessarily disqualified from the succession. Only those who marry Catholics were. When (like the Duchess of Kent) a spouse converts to Catholiscism, that did not disqualify their husbands or wives. Gerard von Hebel (talk) 13:36, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- The first articles in both the Acts of Union 1707 say the "United Kingdom". DrKay (talk) 14:00, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- It has been argued that the term "United Kingdom" as used in the Act of 1707 was a matter of speech. Not the christening of a Kingdom. The text of the first article of 1707 mentions the phrase UK outside the part in which the Kingdom gets it's name of Great Britain. That Kingdom was diplomatically known as the Kingdom of Great Britain throughout the 18th century, as it is on wikipedia. The Union of 1801 has always been diplomatically known as the UK. Besides, if the Act of 1707 created a whole new monarchy, why would the Act of 1801 be different from that?
- The 1707 text of article one is:
That the two Kingdoms of England and Scotland shall upon the First day of May which shall be in the year One thousand seven hundred and seven and for ever after be united into one Kingdom by the name of Great Britain. And that the Ensigns Armorial of the said United Kingdom be such as Her Majesty shall appoint and the Crosses of St. George and St. Andrew be conjoyned in such manner as Her Majesty shall think fit and used in all Flags Banners Standards and Ensigns both at Sea and Land.
- The act of 1801's article one however says:
That it be first article of the union of the kingdoms of Great Britain and Ireland, that the said kingdoms of Great Britain and Ireland shall, upon the first day of January, which shall be in the year of our lord one thousand eight hundred and one, and for ever, be united into one kingdom, by the name of “the united kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland,” and that the royal stile and titles appertaining to the imperial crown of the said united kingdom and its dependencies, and also the ensigns, armourial flags and banners thereof, shall be such as his Majesty by his royal proclamation under the great seal of the united kingdom shall be pleased to appoint.
- Both acts explicitly mention "by the name of" followed by what they are supposed to be called. I don't think there can be doubt therefore what the names of these Kingdoms are /were.
- Therefore the Parliament of Great Britain 1707-1801 did not include the term "United Kingdom" in it's name, while Parliament since 1801 has. It was only by changing the name of Parliament in 1927 that the term Northern Ireland became part of the name of the state.Gerard von Hebel (talk) 17:17, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- As can be seen from the article content as well as the first sentence of the lead and the redirects pointing here, the article (although titled Monarchy of the United Kingdom) is about the British monarchy. The foundation of the British monarchy and who was the first British monarch is contentious. DrKay (talk) 16:42, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- Therefore the Parliament of Great Britain 1707-1801 did not include the term "United Kingdom" in it's name, while Parliament since 1801 has. It was only by changing the name of Parliament in 1927 that the term Northern Ireland became part of the name of the state.Gerard von Hebel (talk) 17:17, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
Attorney-General's statement
[edit]A great overview of the role and position within the constitution of the monarch and the heir apparent from the current Attorney General.
Read from para. 6 at the foot of page 3
Conventions and practices, including ones relating to the heir apparent and his "preparations for kingship". Quite a notable statement and possibly could be used to reference (and expand/correct) this Wikipedia article and others.
Can I ask editors to read through the document, especially from the bottom of page 3, as it is an excellent source and explains the situation (re: the monarch's/the PoW's role in British politics and government) clearly and concisely too. David (talk) 13:36, 16 October 2012 (UTC)
- Yeah, it is a well-written and concise opinion and not in the usual arcane legalese one might otherwise have expected. I can see no good reason for why it should not be included in this article & in PoW. RicJac (talk) 03:58, 2 November 2012 (UTC)
Voluntary abdication?
[edit]The article states as fact that Edward VIII was the only monarch to abdicate voluntarily, and cites James II as involuntarily abdicating. But, as said in the article on James II, the Convention Parliament held that James, by fleeing the country, had voluntarily abdicated.
(The article on the Convention Parliament has its own POV problems, but that is another matter.)
Seems we shouldn't state as fact a point which is controversial. Thoughts? --Tbanderson (talk) 17:20, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
- I tend to agree. I'm not sure about Richard II either. Deb (talk) 17:31, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
- The "abdication" of James II wasn't voluntarily just because Parliament said so. In fact he remained a pretender to the throne of England until he died. I'm pretty sure Richard II and Edward II didn't volunteer either. These kings were overthrown. Gerard von Hebel (talk) 17:46, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, but the point is no one can be sure either way - when you say "I'm pretty sure", you are talking about making an educated guess. Unless there is definite evidence (the official records say otherwise), it shouldn't be stated in a wikipedia article that Edward VIII was the only one to abdicate voluntarily.Deb (talk) 09:35, 26 May 2013 (UTC)
- Gerard says "In fact he remained a pretender to the throne of England until he died." That could prove he didn't intend to abdicate, or it could prove that James had second thoughts, right? --Tbanderson (talk) 18:57, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
- It "suggests" those things, but I don't think it "proves" them. Proof would be a statement by James II saying "I never intended to abdicate." I'm not sure if he ever made such a statement. Deb (talk) 11:28, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
- It does more than suggest them. He kept calling himself King of England, Ireland and of Scots. He even accepted the recognition of these titles and the authority associated with them by some foreign powers, most notably France. He kept giving people peerages as if he was a ruling monarch. Gerard von Hebel (talk) 12:48, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
- Yes, but even a reference to these activities would not prove that he did not abdicate. As Tbanderson mentions, he could simply have changed his mind after the event. The "proof" would be what I mentioned in my previous comment Deb (talk) 15:22, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
- James never issued a statement of abdication, neither written nor verbal. He left the country fleeing for his life. Leaving the country is not an act of abdication. Elizabeth II frequently does, and is never thought to have abdicated. Tresmegistus (talk) 20:11, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- This is a specious argument.Deb (talk) 20:24, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- James II's abdication was a legal fiction invented by Parliament to absolve itself of the deposition of a monarch regarded as reigning by divine right. They did not want to negotiate with a captive king, as they had done with his father. It is pretty clear that James did not voluntarily abdicate. But it's questionable that any English/British monarch ever voluntarily abdicated. Can Edward be said to have voluntarily abdicated, knowing that his refusal would bring on a constitutional crisis of enormous magnitude? Could we say such of Richard II or Edward II, who knew that poison or a knife in the chest at midnight were the likely alternatives? A better phrase to use is perhaps, 'freely abdicated'. I don't think any English or British monarch could be said to have freely abdicated. Scandinavian and Netherlands monarchs, yes. So it's perhaps wiser to omit the reference to 'voluntary abdication' altogether.Gazzster (talk) 02:49, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- This is a specious argument.Deb (talk) 20:24, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
- The legal position is that Parliament alone decides who is to be the monarch, and who is no longer to be the monarch. Edward VIII is said to have abdicated, but in reality such an act on his part would have been of nil effect until the parliament agreed. He signed an Instrument of Abdication on 10 December 1936, but that of itself did not cause him to cease being king. It was only when the parliament passed His Majesty's Declaration of Abdication Act 1936, and Edward gave his Royal Assent to that act on 11 December, that he ceased being king. It was hypothetically possible for him to have changed his mind after a good night's sleep, and refused to sign the act. That would have sparked a constitutional crisis of a different kind, but Edward would have remained king at least until the matter was resolved. -- Jack of Oz [Talk] 03:47, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- True, that was the case for Edward VIII, but it really has no bearing on whether the abdication was 'voluntary' or not ('free' is the word I would choose to use). But certainly for James II this is not the case, for the constitutional conventions you allude to had not yet been canonised.Gazzster (talk) 22:41, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
- The legal position is that Parliament alone decides who is to be the monarch, and who is no longer to be the monarch. Edward VIII is said to have abdicated, but in reality such an act on his part would have been of nil effect until the parliament agreed. He signed an Instrument of Abdication on 10 December 1936, but that of itself did not cause him to cease being king. It was only when the parliament passed His Majesty's Declaration of Abdication Act 1936, and Edward gave his Royal Assent to that act on 11 December, that he ceased being king. It was hypothetically possible for him to have changed his mind after a good night's sleep, and refused to sign the act. That would have sparked a constitutional crisis of a different kind, but Edward would have remained king at least until the matter was resolved. -- Jack of Oz [Talk] 03:47, 13 July 2013 (UTC)
Criticism of the British Monarchy
[edit]A new section has been included regarding legitimate criticisms of the British monarchical system. The article is unquestioningly too biased towards the monarchy. In order to ensure a subjectively balanced portrayal of differing opinions regarding the political implications of the British monarchical system, a section titled "Criticisms" is necessary.
Another section titled "Modern Status" was previously existent; but was really a criticism of the modern monarchy than descriptive of the "modern status" of the actual monarchy.
Administrators have recommended that the section be merged under the new title "Criticism" and be expanded further to present a more balanced approach to the article. When editing the subtitle "Criticism", follow Wikipedia's citation policy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.199.114.18 (talk) 15:53, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- I'm not sure what administrators have recommended that, but they're certainly not Wikipedia administrators. Articles should endeavour to not have criticism sections, but incorportate all viewpoints, positive, neutral, and critical, into the relevant sections, in proportion to their significance in third party sources. See WP:NPOV and Wikipedia:Criticism. WilyD 16:24, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- In any event, continued edit warring is not acceptable, so have a discussion here instead. WilyD 16:38, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- The section entitled "Criticism" was unduly deleted, it met all the criteria. Simply put, it appears that you are biasing the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.199.114.18 (talk • contribs) 16:51, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- With regard to the specific content, I didn't particularly read it. I'm not involved in developing/maintaining this article. But consensus is one of the criteria, and it wasn't being met here. To stop further edit warring, the article is locked so everyone has to sit down and reach a consensus on how to organise material/what material to include, and so on. WilyD 16:53, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- As indicated in the edit summary[2], by WilyD above, in the linked essay, and by Myopic Bookworm in the previous discussion at Talk:Monarchy of the United Kingdom/Archive 3#Lack of a criticism section, the addition of a section solely devoted to "Criticism" is itself bias. DrKay (talk) 16:57, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- Issue resolved, a separate article entitled "Criticism of the British Monarchy" will be introduced. I would like your help to organize the future article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.199.114.18 (talk • contribs) 18:59, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- That sounds like a POV fork that would have much the same problems as the section. You say above that this article is "too biased towards the monarchy" but there is another section above this one that starts off with someone complaining about the #Republican Tone of the article. That indicates to me that the article is balanced, and an occasional complaint from either extreme that the article is not skewed to their own POV is only to be expected. I remain to be convinced that there is either any pro-monarchy or any pro-republican bias in the article. DrKay (talk) 19:22, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- Issue resolved, a separate article entitled "Criticism of the British Monarchy" will be introduced. I would like your help to organize the future article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.199.114.18 (talk • contribs) 18:59, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
Wikipedia is not a propaganda tool for monarchists. Criticism is perfectly legitimate here. The comment that said I did'nt read it is funny, and the argument that having a section with the opposing view is POV is hilarious. The whole article is a listing the functionning of this discusting ideology like nothing is wrong with this mentality is just too funny. We need to mention that this tyranical, racist and violent system is a failed ideology. Currently England is Republic with Clowns. It functions has a republic, but it keeps a clown system to pretend they won a war they lost a long time ago. I will put the section on criticism back in the page. Dear Monarchists, you don't own Wikipedia.EMvague (talk) 00:32, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
- ==Criticism==
Criticism of the British Monarchy includes, but is not limited to the following themes: That the monarchy is un-elected, and therefore an inherently discriminatory elitist institution. It has also been observed that the nature of the monarchical system creates special privileges for the crown and the royal family that are exclusive [5]. The monarchy has also been criticized for undermining fundamental democratic and republican values through the enforcement of a rigid social structure [6]. Other grounds for criticism include the lack of independent financial accountability and transparency [7]. The National Audit Office was not allowed to audit the Royal Household. As a response to the monarchy, Republicanism in the United Kingdom grew during the in the 1990s, on account of negative publicity associated with the Royal Family, including (for instance, immediately following the death of Diana, Princess of Wales) [8]. It should be noted, that prior to 2003, criticism of the British Monarchy was punishable by imprisonment under the crime of Treason.[9].
AfD
[edit]Note that I have initiated an AfD at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Criticism of the British Monarchy, which appears to be a pov content fork. Safiel (talk) 16:02, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
References
- ^ http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/northern_ireland/6275011.stm
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(help) - ^ Act of Settlement 1700(c.2), Article II, retrieved 14 May 2010
- ^ Union with Scotland Act 1706 (c.11), Article II, retrieved 14 May 2010
- ^ Union with England Act 1707 (c.7), Article II, retrieved 14 May 2010
- ^ Queen Elizabeth II's Military titles
- ^ Hames, Tim; Leonard, Mark (1998). Modernising the monarchy. Demos. p. 22. ISBN 978-1-898309-74-1
- ^ "The mysteries of the royal finances are symptomatic of the monarchy's lack of openness and accountability" Peter Tatchell Royals 'cost the taxpayer £37.4m'
- ^ Seely, Robert (5 September 1997), Can the Windsors survive Diana's death?, Britannia Internet Magazine, retrieved 20 April 2008
- ^ R. (Rusbridger) v. Attorney General [2003] UKHL 38; [2004] AC 357; [2003] 3 All ER 784.
Ireland did not "leave" the Commonwealth; it declared itself a republic and thereby was excluded.
[edit]I made an edit to clarify that Ireland did not "leave" the Commonwealth. It declared itself a republic and was by virtue of so doing, excluded. I have no problem adding wording to the effect that it was willingly excluded or the like. However, this is an important historical fact. Ireland never issued any statement withdrawing its Commonwealth membership in April 1949. Frenchmalawi (talk) 04:01, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
- Here is my current suggestion:
The Irish Free State was renamed Ireland in 1937. In 1949, Ireland officially declared that it was a republic. Because it did this, its membership was automatically terminated. Ireland's government policy did not object to this.
- At midnight on the 17/18 April 1949, Ireland announced it had left the Commonwealth and had become the Republic of Ireland. On recognition of this, the British government published its Ireland Bill on 3 May to legislate for the Republic's leaving of the Commonwealth.
- ref: The Oxford History of the British Empire: Volume IV: The Twentieth Century, pp 161-2. --Bill Reid | (talk) 18:44, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
Irish language names for Irish state
[edit]The Irish Free State had an Irish language name. It was "Saorstát Éireann". Ireland has an Irish language name, "Éire". This is English language Wikipedia. Why are some Editor(s) trying to make out that the name of the Irish state is "Éire"? I have reverted that edit. If this is controversial, it ought to be discussed. The Irish state has had the same name since 1937. Frenchmalawi (talk) 04:08, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
Secession versus Independence
[edit]I have amended a statement that Ireland, then the Irish Free State, gained "independence from" the UK. Ireland seceded from the UK. I don't think its right to say it gained independence from it. Ireland was part of the UK. Could it have gained independence from itself?.....I am open to informed thoughts of others on this topic. This concerns Ireland but it is no doubt applicable to other countries like South Sudan. It crops up in this particular article. Frenchmalawi (talk) 04:27, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
- As a former nation member of the United Kingdom, The Republic of Ireland did not gain independence from itself, but rather gained independence from the larger umbrella organization (the UK) that had conquered Ireland and exerted often brutal control over the island. When I read about Irish history, the language that is used to describe establishment of the Republic of Ireland is Irish independence. I do not recall ever previously hearing a description of the establishment of the Republic of Ireland as a secession.
- The Merriam-Webster definitions may be insignificant compared to the historical and political issues being discussed, but here they are --
- Secession: formal withdrawal from an organization.
- Independence: the quality or state of being independent.
- Independent: not dependent: such as (1): not subject to control by others : SELF-GOVERNING, and (2): not affiliated with a larger controlling unit.
- The UK was definitely a larger controlling unit over Ireland, and creation of the Republic of Ireland was establishment of self-governance (independence). The fight for Irish independence goes far beyond formal withdrawal from an organization (secession). Maybe the United States’ use of the term secession to describe events of the Civil War have colored our sense of the difference between secession and independence. DarkMatterMind (talk) 22:59, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
The need for a 'Criticism' section and previous censorship of it
[edit]Previous attempts have been made to include a section detailing criticism and opposition to the British Monarchy within this article. However, others have asserted that these views are a ‘minority’ position and therefore do not warrant mention. Well, yes, were they in the majority, Britain would be a republic. The opponents to including a criticism section have defended their conviction by including a fleeting point of how popular the Monarchy remains as a result of opinion polls in the ‘modern status’ sub-section of the ‘History’ section – for them, this is quite enough to close down the discussion. Therefore, this casual dismissal of something that is not regarded as mainstream necessarily distorts the current article’s contents as biased and tacitly pro-monarchy. The omission of the fact that there are individuals and tradition opposed to the Monarchy in Britain is not only motivated by efforts to portray the Monarchy as monolithically popular, it is an educational disgrace unfitting of an encyclopaedia.
For example, it is imperative to mention that many people condemn the Royal Prerogative as arbitrary, enabling the Prime Minister and government to bypass Parliament. It is also generally taboo to mock or openly criticise members of the Royal Family and the institution of Monarchy itself (the recent attempts to excise points establishing this fact serving as patent example of this). Nevertheless, satirical depictions of the Royals have gradually become commonplace. Furthermore, the fact that Britain has a long-standing republican tradition really ought to be mentioned on here.
Bias is implicit throughout the current article. For example, quotes favourable to the institution and made by the likes of Walter Bagehot, are used consistently to esteem it. Conversely, no critical quotes of it appear anywhere in the article. Moreover, returning to ‘modern status’ section – the point about republicanism growing in the 1990s implies that it only suddenly came into existence during that decade. This needs to be better-composed and the long history of republicanism given due credit.155.136.80.81 (talk) 11:03, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
- I'd agree that there is no reason not to include a criticism section just because someone claims that most people support the monarchy (an assertion which is certainly open to debate). However, a "public image of the monarchy" section - or article - could hardly be rejected provided the required references are in place, and would by its very nature have to be written from a neutral point of view. Deb (talk) 11:22, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
- And there is already an article on the subject of Republicanism in the United Kingdom. Deb (talk) 11:25, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
- Deb, you are correct that there is an article dedicated to British republicanism. However, that does not deal with the need for a section detailing opposition/criticism within the current framework of the monarchical British Constitution on this page. For example, Members of Parliament are required by law to make an Oath of Allegiance to the Monarch and his/her heirs before taking their seats in the Commons - however, several MPs use this occasion to assert their anti-monarchist convictions.155.136.80.81 (talk) 12:56, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
- Good articles should basically never have criticism sections - rather, reactions (both positive and negative) should be integrated into the text. It's possible it's not covered in enough depth (though the article is large), but the Modern Republicanism is hardly the only bit on negative reactions (or even the only Republicanism bit Monarchy_of_the_United_Kingdom#Personal_union_and_republican_phase. The bit of history on the First Baron's War and Second Baron's War, also mentioned (briefly) criticisms. Given the article size, it's possible that most changes should be in subordinate articles - for instance the guy in Ontario who keeps suing about no Catholic succession is mentioned in Perth_Agreement#Background; which is probably about right - given a history of more than a thousand years, and an empire that spanned a quarter of the globe, he's not that important in the big scheme of things. WilyD 13:13, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
- Yes and no. I think a separate article on the public image of the monarchy might be worth considering and could be used to incorporate the historical trend as well as current thinking. I'm sure a lot of people are unaware that there were about seven assassination attempts on Queen Victoria or that the press rejoiced when King George IV died. Deb (talk) 14:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
- A Public image of the British Monarchy that covered supporters, detractors, and the conflicted (and, probably what the Royal Family does to cultivate their image) could be really cool. Note though that Criticism of the British Monarchy got nuked for being a criticism article that was highly non-neutral. WilyD 15:38, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
- I'm not sure that "public image" would necessarily cover it - there are more fundamental arguments over the monarchy, which are not based on what their public image may be. A decision would also be needed on whether the article should be restricted to attitudes within the UK, or in the other realms as well. How about Public attitudes towards the monarchy in the United Kingdom? Ghmyrtle (talk) 16:03, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
- A Public image of the British Monarchy that covered supporters, detractors, and the conflicted (and, probably what the Royal Family does to cultivate their image) could be really cool. Note though that Criticism of the British Monarchy got nuked for being a criticism article that was highly non-neutral. WilyD 15:38, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
- Yes and no. I think a separate article on the public image of the monarchy might be worth considering and could be used to incorporate the historical trend as well as current thinking. I'm sure a lot of people are unaware that there were about seven assassination attempts on Queen Victoria or that the press rejoiced when King George IV died. Deb (talk) 14:23, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
- This looks like a straw man argument. I don't see anyone opposing the section on these bases. I see no reason to cover the Victorian republican movement twice. One mention is sufficient. DrKay (talk) 17:24, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
- Then we at least generally agree that criticism/satire of the British Monarchy is worth establishing in a separate wiki page with Deb's suggestion of it being neutralised as a 'Public Perception' of the institution. What is more disturbing,however, is that DrKay seems to think he owns this page judging from the edit history. 155.136.80.171 (talk) 14:18, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
Residence?
[edit]Buckingham Palace is not the Monarch's official residence, St Jame's Palace is, as correctly stated on the St Jame's Palace Wikipedia entry. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.208.147.211 (talk) 13:31, 21 March 2016 (UTC)
Naturally dead?
[edit]A sentence in the article says: An individual thus disabled from inheriting the Crown is deemed "naturally dead" for succession purposes, and the disqualification does not extend to the individual's legitimate descendants. How does a dead person get legitimate descendants for succession purposes? Gerard von Hebel (talk) 22:49, 24 March 2016 (UTC)
- By conceiving them when alive. The excluded person is not dead anyway. They are treated as dead when considering the succession. So, even though they are still alive, the succession jumps to their legitimate non-excluded descendants, by-passing the excluded person. DrKay (talk) 07:15, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
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Requested move 12 September 2017
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The result of the move request was: not moved. DrKay (talk) 16:20, 20 September 2017 (UTC)
- Monarchy of the United Kingdom → British Monarchy
- Monarchy of Canada → Monarchy in Canada
- Monarchy of Australia → Monarchy in Australia
- Monarchy of New Zealand → Monarchy in New Zealand
- Monarchy of Papua New Guinea → Monarchy in Papua New Guinea
- Monarchy of Antigua and Barbuda → Monarchy in Antigua and Barbuda
- Monarchy of the Bahamas → Monarchy in the Bahamas
- Monarchy of Barbados → Monarchy in Barbados
- Monarchy of Belize → Monarchy in Belize
- Monarchy of Grenada → Monarchy in Grenada
- Monarchy of Jamaica → Monarchy in Jamaica
- Monarchy of Saint Kitts and Nevis → Monarchy in Saint Kitts and Nevis
- Monarchy of Saint Lucia → Monarchy in Saint Lucia
- Monarchy of Saint Vincent and the Grenadines → Monarchy in Saint Vincent and the Grenadines
- Monarchy of the Solomon Islands → Monarchy in the Solomon Islands
- Monarchy of Tuvalu → Monarchy in Tuvalu
- Monarchy of Fiji → Monarchy in Fiji
– (1.) Why does the title of the page on the British Head of State use (and indeed have to use at all) an American English- or United States English-based exonym, a clearly unofficial name not actually (and never really been) generally used here in the United Kingdom?! The last time that the British themselves (and that wasn't even the British Government, but the Old English and Old Scottish Parliaments) officially spoke of a "Monarchy of the United Kingdom" in the exact [order of] words, it was back in 1706 (OS) [3] and 1707 (OS) [4]...and clearly in the context of "of England and Scotland in Great Britain and hereafter of Great Britain"! It is noted that HM (Her Majesty's) Government (the British Government) refers to (calls) the position of Queen Elizabeth II as the Head of State of the United Kingdom as "the British Monarchy", and almost never "the Monarchy of the United Kingdom".
[5] (617 results under *.gov.uk)
[6] (7 results for "Monarchy of the United Kingdom" under *.gov.uk)
[7] (0 results for "Monarchy of the United Kingdom"under royal.uk)
(2.) Ditto in and for [the formerly-called Dominion of] Canada.
[8] (2 results under gg.ca)
[9] (38 results)
[10] (2 results for "Monarchy of Canada" under *.gc.ca)
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(3.) Ditto in and for [the Commonwealth of] Australia.
[12] (1 result under gg.gov.au)
[13] (41 results under *.gov.au)
[14] (2 results for "Monarchy of Australia" under *.gov.au)
[15] (0 results for "Monarchy of Australia" under gg.gov.au)
(4.) Generally negative for both terms in and for New Zealand.
[16] (0 results for "Monarchy in New Zealand" under gg.govt.nz)
[17] (6 results for "Monarchy in New Zealand" under *.govt.nz)
[18] (0 results for "Monarchy of New Zealand" under *.govt.nz)
[19] (0 results for "Monarchy of New Zealand" under gg.govt.nz)
(5.) Generally negative for both terms in and for Papua New Guinea.
[20] (0 results for "Monarchy in Papua New Guinea" under *.gov.pg)
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87.102.116.36 (talk) 21:49, 12 September 2017 (UTC)
(Fiji added 87.102.116.36 (talk) 22:16, 12 September 2017 (UTC))
- Oppose: As a matter of ordinary grammatical usage, first, the articles are about "Monarchy of..." not "Monarchy in...", and secondly, the topic "Monarchy of the United Kingdom" is not the same as the topic "British Monarchy". Qexigator (talk) 22:47, 12 September 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose: Monarchy of country is the style used for the Wikipedia articles on monarchies. GoodDay (talk) 23:52, 12 September 2017 (UTC)
- WP:CIRCULAR...basically a whole load of made-up names then! -- 87.102.116.36 (talk) 00:17, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- Grammatical, as in: England's monarchy in Ireland from 13th century to the Act of Union; Spain's monarchy in the Americas; Monarchies in Europe and in Asia from 8th century BCE; Monarchy in Spain from 5th century; Monarchy in Ireland and the British Isles in two millennia. Qexigator (talk) 07:22, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- WP:CIRCULAR...basically a whole load of made-up names then! -- 87.102.116.36 (talk) 00:17, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- Comment I agree the phrasing is poor, but the alternative is no better. The articles are about the king or queen regnant of each country but each possilbe title leaves something to be desired. What about "British monarchy," "Canadian monarchy," etc. TFD (talk) 10:57, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- TFD: Not so: Monarchy of the United Kingdom is not "only about the queen regnant". Sections include Constitutional role, History, Succession. As said above, it is a matter of ordinary grammatical usage, and not actually a problem at all. Qexigator (talk) 13:11, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- Comment: I kind of bristle with this back and forth because the Kingdom of the Netherlands is taking on almost a similar structure as the London based Monarchy now. However, in looking at the Netherlands they regard that family as a single Monarchy as opposed to many which the British one seems to imply by this current naming convention. I was wondering would "Kingdom of (country name) -- for each country besides United Kingdom, make more sense? Because all 16 of the realms are separate Kingdoms that share a single Monarch, as opposed to many Monarchies in many separate Kingdoms? QEII is more like when you see someone serving on many different boards of directorships. So instead you'd have: Kingdom of Canada, Kingdom of Australia, Kingdom of Barbados which cover just the monarchy's role in that Kingdom. CaribDigita (talk) 14:10, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- The Kingdom of the Netherlands is a straight translation from Dutch Het Koninkrijk der Nederlanden. To change Monarchy of the United Kingdom to Kingdom of the United Kingdom (of Great Britain and Northern Ireland) would not be acceptable. By law, Australia is styled Commonwealth of Australia. How would it improve any of the other articles to change from Monarchy of... to Kingdom of... as if Het Koninkrijk der Nederlanden were a relevant precedent, when that name stems from a totally different set of historical events: "The Kingdom of the Netherlands originated in the aftermath of French Emperor Napoleon I’s defeat in 1815. In that year, the Netherlands regained its independence from France under its First French Empire, which had annexed its northern neighbor in 1810, as the Sovereign Principality of the United Netherlands. The great powers of Europe, united against Napoleonic France, had decided in the secret treaty of the London Protocol to establish a single state in the territories that were previously the Dutch Republic/Batavian Republic/Kingdom of Holland, the Austrian Netherlands and the Prince-Bishopric of Liège, awarding rule over this to William, Prince of Orange and Nassau, although the southern territories remained under Prussian (German) rule until Napoleon's return from his first exile on Elba.... In 1830, Belgium seceded from the Kingdom, a step that was recognised by the Netherlands only in 1839. At that point, Luxembourg became a fully independent country in a personal union with the Netherlands." Qexigator (talk) 14:58, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- I meant for example Aruba, Curacao and Sint Maarten. These islands are semi-autonomous from the Netherlands (sort of like the Commonwealth Realms), namely since the Netherlands Antilles Federation was voted out of existence in 2010. Those Dutch islands say they are a part of the same Dutch Monarchy instead of a "Monarchy of Aruba", a "Monarchy of Sint Maarten", and a "Monarchy of Curacao" et. al., My thought is, is the British Monarchy separate "Monarchies" technically or actually separate "Kingdoms" headed by the same Monarchy(collective). It is true the laws for Barbados say the Queen speaks as "Queen of Barbados". BUT the rest of the Monarchy would be the same British Monarchy since the laws of Barbados do not describe the Royal Family outside of the Queen. So the Monarch of Barbados must be the same British Monarchy (with just a Queen of Barbados alone title). The other heirs have no title save for whats under British laws. CaribDigita (talk) 23:13, 15 September 2017 (UTC)
- Comment: Is this some sort of bizarre or sinister EU/European Commission operation from Brussels to "harmonise" the names of anything and everything remotely or conceivably British or UK-related, by sending folk (people) to edit here to change all the names from "British..." or "UK..." to "... of the UK"?! I can just imagine this...M Juncker: "You know what, Gentlemen, why don't we, like Eurovision, start harmonising the names which describe things of, about or from all the members states, including the ones for the United Kingdom?! ... Now, if you don't mind, I have to be off to have lunch with Tony!" I thought a "Directive" is necessary for this sort of thing! -- 87.102.116.36 (talk) 19:18, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- The Kingdom of the Netherlands is a straight translation from Dutch Het Koninkrijk der Nederlanden. To change Monarchy of the United Kingdom to Kingdom of the United Kingdom (of Great Britain and Northern Ireland) would not be acceptable. By law, Australia is styled Commonwealth of Australia. How would it improve any of the other articles to change from Monarchy of... to Kingdom of... as if Het Koninkrijk der Nederlanden were a relevant precedent, when that name stems from a totally different set of historical events: "The Kingdom of the Netherlands originated in the aftermath of French Emperor Napoleon I’s defeat in 1815. In that year, the Netherlands regained its independence from France under its First French Empire, which had annexed its northern neighbor in 1810, as the Sovereign Principality of the United Netherlands. The great powers of Europe, united against Napoleonic France, had decided in the secret treaty of the London Protocol to establish a single state in the territories that were previously the Dutch Republic/Batavian Republic/Kingdom of Holland, the Austrian Netherlands and the Prince-Bishopric of Liège, awarding rule over this to William, Prince of Orange and Nassau, although the southern territories remained under Prussian (German) rule until Napoleon's return from his first exile on Elba.... In 1830, Belgium seceded from the Kingdom, a step that was recognised by the Netherlands only in 1839. At that point, Luxembourg became a fully independent country in a personal union with the Netherlands." Qexigator (talk) 14:58, 13 September 2017 (UTC)
- "UK" as an abbreviation for United Kingdom is widely used, including by the UK government.[24] The United Kingdom is the "United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland", so it makes sense to have an article about the monarchy of the United Kingdom. In some uses Britain means Great Britain, excluding Northern Ireland.
- If an article only covers the current monarchy then "Monarchy of..." is the better title. If an article covered multiple several substantially different monarchical arrangements then "Monarchy in.." should be considered.
- There is a possible argument for Monarchy in Fiji, because that article covers native Fijian monarchs as well as British monarchs. However, my reading of the article is that the British monarchy in Fiji was seen as a continuation of the earlier monarchy and amounted to a change of dynasty, so I favour retaining Monarchy of Fiji.
- Parts of Canada had French kings, as described in History of monarchy in Canada, but Monarchy of Canada is about the current monarchy, so I favour the current name.
- Monarchy of the United Kingdom covers royal dynasties back to Alfred the Great, but this is seen as a continuing monarchy, so the current name is fine.
- None of the other articles cover non-British monarchs, so the "Monarchy of..." titles are appropriate
- Keep the existing article titles. Verbcatcher (talk) 03:20, 15 September 2017 (UTC)
- Keep the titles as they are. If it ain't broke, why fix it? Ltwin (talk) 06:00, 15 September 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose "Monarchy of..." is the consistent format for all articles on monarchies of sovereign states. Further, the suggested unique treatment of the Monarchy of the United Kingdom page strongly hints at an outdated colonial thinking behind this proposal. --₪ MIESIANIACAL 20:05, 16 September 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose For consistency with all other Wikipedia monarchy articles. The proposal for a separate style for the Monarchy of the United Kingdom page ("British monarchy") compared with "Monarchy in Canada" is illogical and non-NPOV. AusLondonder (talk) 01:29, 17 September 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose some of the articles could be merged to a "Monarchy in the British Commonwealth" article; is there really enough content for Monarchy of Barbados, Monarchy of Saint Lucia, and Monarchy of Grenada to be separate articles? Power~enwiki (π, ν) 04:41, 17 September 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose; "Monarchy in Australia" would suggest it's an article about the state of monarchy (or even monarchies) as a concept in Australia, rather than an article about the particular one and only monarchy itself. "Monarchy of Australia" best describes the subject of the article and so is the appropriate title. Liguer (talk) 13:53, 20 September 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]This is a "featured article" with seven paragraphs in the lead. The 4th, 5th, and 6th paragraphs have the same "history" theme (historic timeline) and could be merged together. This would not be a major upsetting or controversial move, but one to enhance the look of the lead as well as a correction to be more in line with the manual of style, by combining partial paragraphs. Otr500 (talk) 09:24, 3 November 2017 (UTC)
- Are you proposing to combine two or more paragraphs simply by removing a line break? Or are you proposing to leave out something and/or rewrite? If so please specify more exactly so that we may decide if it would be an improvement. Qexigator (talk) 12:23, 3 November 2017 (UTC)
- I did not look at the lead content as per article content. I suppose, on that line, I naturally figured the lead was a summary of referenced article content. There is a history timeline, broken into partial paragraphs (per comments above), and it looks chopped up to me. Even if summary content was added from the body there is no reason, that I can see, to have seven paragraphs, let alone seven partial paragraphs.
I looked at the article, saw the classification and issues, and I still think the three historical timeline paragraphs can be merged leaving just four. This would be in line with other related featured articles without these excessive "line break(s)" such as Queen Victoria and George II of Great Britain (four lead paragraphs), William IV of the United Kingdom, Ernest Augustus, King of Hanover, George I of Great Britain (three paragraphs), and probably more.
- The only other improvement (without going exhaustively through the article) would be that "The Act of Settlement 1701 excluded Roman Catholics, or those who married Catholics, from succession to the English throne.", is at odds with the section "Restrictions by gender and religion", and the law as of March 2015. Adding concluding content would be an improvement for what appears to be an outdated statement. Other than these suggestions I think this is a very good article. With lead improvements (presentation) and corrections (repealed law content) this article could be considered as an example in writing better articles. Otr500 (talk) 08:30, 7 November 2017 (UTC)
- The three paragraphs, beginning 'From 1080's...', 'Fom 1603...', 'In early 1920's...', each cover distinctive periods of significance in the history of the monarchy, and could be regarded as "early" - "middle" - "modern", acceptable to readers with prior knowledge and usefully informative for others. Qexigator (talk) 14:54, 7 November 2017 (UTC)
- Why do I feel sometimes that people want to argue --just for the sake of arguing? This good article does not need to have such a badly presented lead. Arguing the whole list of policies and guidelines, and common community practices, is a given when an article is lower classed but seems trivial when dealing with issues on higher class articles. Why we should justify having a lead summary "historic timeline", that allows seven partial lead paragraphs, is not normal community practice on even lower class articles.
- Debating that such timelines are "distinct" to justify separate paragraphs, even though that logic would could lead to further separating the 1701 content in the fifth paragraph from the beginning "1603" timeline, does not justify the need that the content should be separate. The lead "summary" is just that and there is a standard we follow. Deviating from this standard should have clear reasoning.
- The article is listed as featured. It is the "only" one with such rating I have run across that has such a broken up lead. Many featured articles have three paragraphs (some exampled above), many do have four, especially on longer articles, and I would not argue, on a well presented longer article, to having five, if that is what it took to fairly present a good summary. A few do have one (or even two) sentence paragraphs (not including the opening paragraph) if this is deemed necessary.
- The lead can be condensed for a better presentation. The "distinct timelines" are along the same "historical timeline" subject, so I suggest they can be placed in the same lead summary paragraph, which would be an improvement. As long as we are debating my suggestions so "we may decide if it would be an improvement", I am alright with this, not so much with circular arguments that there is nothing wrong with the lead.
- The lead needs improvement. I would like to attempt to have a dialog on "how" my legitimate concerns can be best addressed to bring the lead into line with other like classed articles such as found at Category:Featured articles and not debate justification for ignoring the rules. The criteria for ignoring the "rules" are simple, "If a rule prevents you from improving or maintaining Wikipedia, ignore it.", but is still subjected to broad community consensus, and is not applicable here.
- With all that I would just like to know if we can have a discussion on "improvements" to the lead. It would look great with four paragraphs, and five if that is really needed, but there is absolutely no need for a chopped up seven paragraph lead on a featured article, we advance as the "best articles Wikipedia has to offer". My assessment is that at least three paragraphs can be combined. The content concerning "The Act of Settlement 1701" needs to be updated since the article shows at least parts of it were repealed. These are legitimate issues I have raised, and now repeated, and would really like to have this addressed here to prevent a need to seek a review. I am not a contributing editor on this article so do you suppose it is possible this can be discussed to a favorable resolution for "improvement"? Thank you, Otr500 (talk) 07:54, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
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[edit]The first sentence says "The monarchy of the United Kingdom, commonly referred to as the British monarchy, is the constitutional monarchy of the United Kingdom, its dependencies (the Bailiwick of Guernsey, the Bailiwick of Jersey and the Isle of Man) and its overseas territories." The word "its" needs clarification. The first "its" must refer to the monarchy, as those units are not dependencies or parts of the UK, but are dependencies directly of the monarchy. The second "its" must refer to the UK, as there is no special relationship between these territories and the monarchy except inasmuch as they are under the UK.--Richardson mcphillips (talk) 16:25, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
Capitalisation of Monarch and Monarchy
[edit]Monarch and Monarchy should be capitalized, as this is the case on the official website of the British Monarchy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Iliketoeatbeansalot (talk • contribs) 18:25, 16 September 2019 (UTC)
- Different organisations have different manuals of style. Ours avoids unnecessary capitalisation. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters. Celia Homeford (talk) 07:10, 17 September 2019 (UTC)
Lede Paragraph 2
[edit]Over the past day or so I've attempted to re-write paragraph two of the lede, as in its original form it did not form a coherent whole and was overly-complex for a beginner to the subject. The original paragraph was as follows:
The monarch and their immediate family undertake various official, ceremonial, diplomatic and representational duties. As the monarchy is constitutional the monarch is limited to functions such as bestowing honours and appointing the prime minister, which are performed in a non-partisan manner. The monarch is commander-in-chief of the British Armed Forces. Though the ultimate executive authority over the government is still formally by and through the monarch's royal prerogative, these powers may only be used according to laws enacted in Parliament and, in practice, within the constraints of convention and precedent.
I re-wrote it as so:
Executive power in the UK is theoretically exercised by the monarch using the royal prerogative, though many of these powers are now exercised by other officers, such as government ministers. Where prerogative powers remain with the monarch personally, such as the appointment of the Prime Minister, they are exercised within the constraints of convention and precedent. The monarch is also the commander-in-chief of the British Armed Forces and the Supreme Governor of the Church of England, the established religion of England. In addition to these roles the monarch and their immediate family undertake various official, ceremonial, diplomatic and representational duties.
I believe that this edit is easier to understand, as it is succinct and follows a logical structure, beginning with the monarch's executive power and then naming their other significant roles. It has however been reverted with the following reason given:
undo, not an improvement. This is not a good place to develop or expound a personal theory of government in the UK.. The lead must not seek to outdo the main body where content is based on uncontentious reliable sources.
This confuses me, as my edit is only a reformulation of the original and is not a personal theory. It follows the definition of the royal prerogative set out by Parliament and seen in this research paper (sections 1.1 and 1.2 in particular). I'm also unsure what the second sentence refers to, as the body of the article contains a far more comprehensive explanation of the monarchy's powers than my paragraph.
Rather than begin an edit war I'd like to bring this to the talk page for community discussion. A.D.Hope (talk) 22:33, 4 February 2020 (UTC)
- The UK constitution is such that it has long been, and is, difficult for the most knowledgeable, experienced and respected writers to avoid tendentious language when attempting to use few words. This article is not a good place for contributors to make statements that are not supported by standard sources, or to be incautious when composing summary paragraphs for the lead. The proposed sentences Executive power in the UK is theoretically exercised by the monarch using the royal prerogative, though many of these powers are now exercised by other officers, such as government ministers. Where prerogative powers remain with the monarch personally, such as the appointment of the Prime Minister, they are exercised within the constraints of convention and precedent. may seem innocuous but are in fact tendentious. In particular, outside a specialist context it is seldom helpfully informative to write about "executive power" and offer an opinion about its theoretical exercise. The use of the royal prerogative is always (historically and today) a sensitive topic, and only recently there has occurred a major clash between the government's lawyers, along with the English High Court, and the Supreme Court's retrospective innovative ruling. The existing paragraph is not as defective as has been suggested, and if it were, the proposed rewrite makes no improvement. For my part I hope others will find my two recent edits acceptable, here[25] and here[26] Qexigator (talk) 23:34, 4 February 2020 (UTC)
- What about that statement is tendentious or not supported by the 'standard sources'? The source I have provided backs up every statement I've made, and itself uses Dicey, Blackstone, and Wade as its sources. I have not gone into the definition of what exactly the royal prerogative is as the lede is not the place for it, but I do not think the phrase 'executive power' is inaccurate - 'executive prerogative powers' is the phrase the government uses. Nevertheless, if it's such a problem then the first sentence could be re-written something like: 'The British monarch has a range of powers which are exercised using the royal prerogative, though many of these powers are now exercised in practice by other officers, such as government ministers.' A.D.Hope (talk) 08:35, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
- I note what you say but it does not respond to the points in my comments above. Let us see what others have to say, who have been editing here for some time and are familiar with the topic and the content. By the way, research papers published under the auspices of Parliament can often be helpful but for Wikipedia purposes, may be treated with some reserve. They are produced in certain circumstances, for particular purposes in a political environment, and are not open to wider scrutiny than of those whom their authors serve. Of course, independent specialist writers, scholars and students recognise the importance of Blackstone, Dicey and Wade. I would not object to a well-chosen quote or two from any of them if you are relying on any particular passages, but others might, and quoting out of context may also be tendentious. Two opposing advocates may use the same or similar texts to support their own argument, and the judges may be convinced by neither. Qexigator (talk) 19:01, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
- The onus is on you to explain where my paragraph is tendentious and why 'executive power' is an inappropriate phrase; so far you have not. The only word that could be construed as offering an opinion is 'theoretically', and that is easily fixed if necessary. I accept that the briefing paper is not as authoritative as Dicey, Wade, and Blackstone's original texts, but as a summary of their varying views I think it is a worthwhile source. I am in agreement that the opinions of other, preferably seasoned editors would be helpful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by A.D.Hope (talk • contribs) 18:43, 6 February 2020 (UTC)
- Let us see what others have to say, who have been editing here for some time and are familiar with the topic and the content. Meantime, please explain how you feel justified in failing to support here your proposed wording by quoting recognized writers such as the trio named, or to disregard "The UK constitution is such that it has long been, and is, difficult for the most knowledgeable, experienced and respected writers to avoid tendentious language when attempting to use few words. This article is not a good place for contributors to make statements that are not supported by standard sources, or to be incautious when composing summary paragraphs for the lead." Please note that I am not stating that the wording of the present version is perfect and beyond improvement, but it is better to leave it in simple terms as it is than to use expressions that, as I have indicated, are tendentious in this context and not suited to this article's lead. The position concerning the monarch's powers is suffciently and acceptably mentioned in the lead, in simple descriptive terms, unencumbered with complex concepts such as "executive power", and then expanded in the section "Constitutional role" and further expanded in the linked Royal prerogative in the United Kingdom, where in the expanded text, such concepts become acceptable. This is usually the way to construct and compose an article such as this to reach a satisfactory outcome. Qexigator (talk) 23:22, 6 February 2020 (UTC)
- + Maybe I should add: You say that your proposed rewrite is based on the opinion that the current version does "not form a coherent whole and was overly-complex for a beginner to the subject", and that your belief is that your rewrite above "is easier to understand, as it is succinct and follows a logical structure, beginning with the monarch's executive power and then naming their other significant roles". It will be tedious to undertake a line by line comparative analysis, but to my mind the current version is not aptly described as not forming a coherent whole and overly complex, nor is your rewrite easier to understand for a beginner to the subject. A breakdown of the current version would be:
- The onus is on you to explain where my paragraph is tendentious and why 'executive power' is an inappropriate phrase; so far you have not. The only word that could be construed as offering an opinion is 'theoretically', and that is easily fixed if necessary. I accept that the briefing paper is not as authoritative as Dicey, Wade, and Blackstone's original texts, but as a summary of their varying views I think it is a worthwhile source. I am in agreement that the opinions of other, preferably seasoned editors would be helpful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by A.D.Hope (talk • contribs) 18:43, 6 February 2020 (UTC)
- I note what you say but it does not respond to the points in my comments above. Let us see what others have to say, who have been editing here for some time and are familiar with the topic and the content. By the way, research papers published under the auspices of Parliament can often be helpful but for Wikipedia purposes, may be treated with some reserve. They are produced in certain circumstances, for particular purposes in a political environment, and are not open to wider scrutiny than of those whom their authors serve. Of course, independent specialist writers, scholars and students recognise the importance of Blackstone, Dicey and Wade. I would not object to a well-chosen quote or two from any of them if you are relying on any particular passages, but others might, and quoting out of context may also be tendentious. Two opposing advocates may use the same or similar texts to support their own argument, and the judges may be convinced by neither. Qexigator (talk) 19:01, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
- What about that statement is tendentious or not supported by the 'standard sources'? The source I have provided backs up every statement I've made, and itself uses Dicey, Blackstone, and Wade as its sources. I have not gone into the definition of what exactly the royal prerogative is as the lede is not the place for it, but I do not think the phrase 'executive power' is inaccurate - 'executive prerogative powers' is the phrase the government uses. Nevertheless, if it's such a problem then the first sentence could be re-written something like: 'The British monarch has a range of powers which are exercised using the royal prerogative, though many of these powers are now exercised in practice by other officers, such as government ministers.' A.D.Hope (talk) 08:35, 5 February 2020 (UTC)
- 1- The monarch and their immediate family undertake various official, ceremonial, diplomatic and representational duties. [comment: begin with the monarch]
- 2- As the monarchy is constitutional the monarch is limited to functions such as bestowing honours and appointing the prime minister, which are performed in a non-partisan manner. [comment: basic short description of the monarchy, expanded in the main body]
- 3- The monarch is commander-in-chief of the British Armed Forces. [comment: important aspect of the monarchy, not self-evident from 1 and 2]
- 4- Though the ultimate executive authority over the government is still formally by and through the monarch's royal prerogative, these powers may only be used according to laws enacted in Parliament and, in practice, within the constraints of convention and precedent. [comment: important statement about the monarch's position in the operation of the monarchy, not self-evident from 1, 2 and 3]
- 5- The Government of the United Kingdom is known as Her (His) Majesty's Government. [comment: can be seen as summing up in few words the practical operation of the monarchy in respect of 1-4]
- A well composed essay or full length book on the subject could well be arranged with a series of chapters 1-5 as above, and those statements could be used as epitomes, chapter by chapter. In fact, anyone is free to do so, given that copyright is not reserved. A bonus would be adding suitable quotations from Blackstone, Dicey and Wade, and possibly from T.D.Weldon's The Vocabulary of Politics. Qexigator (talk) 07:50, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- I'll keep this brief, as my intent was not to create a long back-and-forth between the two of us. The 'tendentious' part of my paragraph states that:
- The monarch has executive power, exercised using the royal prerogative.
- That this power is shared with government ministers.
- Where the prerogative is retained by the sovereign it is subject to conditions.
- I'll keep this brief, as my intent was not to create a long back-and-forth between the two of us. The 'tendentious' part of my paragraph states that:
- I can support these statements using Blackstone and Dicey, who are 'standard sources'.
- Dicey: 'The prerogative is the name for the remaining portion of the Crown's original authority, and is therefore [...] the name for the residue of discretionary power left at any moment in the hands of the Crown, whether such power be in fact exercised by the Queen herself or her ministers.'
- 'The conventions of the constitution are in short rules intended to regulate the whole of the remaining discretionary powers of the Crown, whether these powers are exercised by the Queen herself or by the Ministry.' (pp. 189-90)
- Blackstone: 'The limitation of the king's prerogative, by bounds so certain and notorious, that it is impossible he should exceed them without the consent of the people. Of this also I shall treat in it's proper place. The former of these keeps the legislative power in due health and vigour, so as to make it improbable that laws should be enacted destructive of general liberty : the latter is a guard upon the executive power, by restraining it from acting either beyond or in contradiction to the laws, that are framed and established by the other.' [source]
- I don't think your points about incaution and the difficulty others have found in summarising the prerogative, well-made as they are, are particularly relevant. Whether 'Executive power' is a confusing phrase is subjective, and while I don't think it is the first sentence could be re-written to exclude it.
- I can support these statements using Blackstone and Dicey, who are 'standard sources'.
- As for the structure of the current paragraph, although I appreciate your commentary I'm afraid I can't agree. The constitutional role of the monarchy is more important than the other duties the Royal Family undertake, so it should begin the paragraph, as in the articles about the monarchies of the Netherlands, Spain, and Sweden. The sentence about the monarch being head of the Armed Forces breaks up the two sentences about the constitutional/governmental role of the monarch, and should be placed after the latter. The phrase 'by and through' is also confusing - surely 'by' or 'through' alone would make just as much sense? The comment about the name of the government does not really add anything of importance and can be removed. I feel that my paragraph - which is based on the content of the original - achieves a better balance by stating the monarch's constitutional role first, then their other important duties, and finally the additional roles the royal family undertake. It is not a perfect paragraph (it could mention the role of statute law in controlling the prerogative, for example), but I do think it is better than the one it would replace.
- I would also like to add that I appreciate your scrutiny of my proposed edit, not least as it's made me think more deeply about my decisions,so thank you for that. A.D.Hope (talk) 19:47, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- Among competent writers conversant with the topic. it is normally recognized that "power" and "authority", in the context of jurisprudence and political discussion, have distinct connotations, and this distinction affects the meaningful use of "executive power" and "executive authority". In public discourse, such as judicial rulings or political debate, the distinction may become obscured, tendentiously or inadvertently, and it may be necessary from time to time that higher or later tribunals or lawmakers, and independent writers, take care to bring back or retain clarity with such contributions to the topic as they propose to publish. See further below "Time to close?" Qexigator (talk) 10:32, 9 February 2020 (UTC)
- I would also like to add that I appreciate your scrutiny of my proposed edit, not least as it's made me think more deeply about my decisions,so thank you for that. A.D.Hope (talk) 19:47, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
Time to close?
[edit]it would be advisable to let this discussion close, given that
- the article has been starred as "featured" for over ten years, and the content of what is now paragraph 2 in the current version has remained practically unchanged in that period;
- the content of point 4 - Though the ultimate executive authority over the government is still formally by and through the monarch's royal prerogative, these powers may only be used according to laws enacted in Parliament and, in practice, within the constraints of convention and precedent - is evidently carefully worded to suit that context by avoiding saying too much or too little;
- the portions of Dicey and Blackstone quoted by the proposer show that the proposed rewrite would fail, as commented above, to improve the current version, in that, among other things, the proposed wording would use "executive power" instead of the wording, better said in this context, "executive authority";
- a link for "Her Majesty's Government" [27] has recently been added as point 5, to sum up in few words the practical operation of the monarchy in respect of 1-4 that is expanded explained in the main body of the article and further explained in linked articles.
Qexigator (talk) 08:55, 9 February 2020 (UTC)
- No. There's no requirement to close discussions, and when they are this should be done by an uninvolved editor, which you are not. What you've provided above is really a list of reasons why you think the current paragraph is adequate, rather than good reasons to close the discussion. I'm going to put out a request for comment and ask on some of the WikiProject pages to try and attract some outside opinions. A.D.Hope (talk) 09:36, 9 February 2020 (UTC)
RfC about the second paragraph of the lede
[edit]Does the second paragraph of the lede need re-structuring? If it does is the proposed replacement acceptable? A.D.Hope (talk) 09:40, 9 February 2020 (UTC)
- Oppose given that
- - the article has been starred as "featured" for over ten years, and the content of what is now paragraph 2 in the current version has remained practically unchanged in that period (see Archive review and Featured article at Discussion below);
- - the content of point 4 in the current version (as numbered in the comment above (7.50, 7 Feb)[28]-[quote] Though the ultimate executive authority over the government is still formally by and through the monarch's royal prerogative, these powers may only be used according to laws enacted in Parliament and, in practice, within the constraints of convention and precedent - is evidently carefully worded to suit that context by avoiding saying too much or too little;
- - the portions of Dicey and Blackstone quoted by the proposer show that the proposed rewrite would fail, as commented above, to improve the current version, in that, among other things, the proposed wording would use "executive power" instead of the wording, better said in this context, "executive authority";
- - a link for "Her Majesty's Government" [29] has recently been added as point 5, to sum up in few words the practical operation of the monarchy in respect of points 1-4 that are expanded and more fully explained in the main body of the article and further explained in linked articles.
- - it is normally recognized that "power" and "authority", in the context of jurisprudence and political discussion, have distinct connotations, and this distinction affects the meaningful use of "executive power" and "executive authority". In public discourse, such as judicial rulings or political debate, the distinction may become obscured, tendentiously or inadvertently, and it may be necessary from time to time that higher or later tribunals or lawmakers, and independent writers, take care to bring back or retain clarity with such contributions to the topic as they propose to publish. Qexigator (talk) 12:38, 9 February 2020 (UTC)
- Comment Personally, I lean towards the proposed second paragraph, however I think it could benefit from some tweaking. That said, I think it has a better flow from point to point, which to try and show sentence to sentence;
- Existing: Ceremonial duties → Constitutional powers → Other role as CiC → Constitutional powers → Name of the UK government
- Proposed: Constitutional powers → Constitutional powers → Other role as CiC and CoE Gov. → Cermonial duties
The existing paragraph inserts information about the monarch being CiC in the middle of an explanation about the exercise of constitutional powers, it's a short sentence that doesn't tell us much and doesn't fit well (in my opinion, of course). I like that the proposed paragraph mentions her religious role, this is important information that I think the article benefits from having mentioned early. Obviously the lede can't discuss every role the monarch has (e.g. Head of the Commonwealth) but it shows the reader that the monarch fulfils several roles other than simply being King/Queen. The sentence concerning the name of the UK government seems like an afterthought, this should be deleted regardless.
Where I think the proposed paragraph falls short— It uses some terminology that should be avoided altogether (as discussed above, using the word 'theoretically' presents issues). Additionally, while most people on this talk page know what executive power and royal prerogative are, I question whether their stand alone use is beneficial so early in the article. They are somewhat advanced concepts that when not constrained by the brevity constraints of being in a lede section are complex enough that they could be explained on introduction. Some rewording might help these sentences.
Effectively, I think there is the seed of an improved paragraph, but it would need some alterations before I would be comfortable stating my support for it to be incorporated. Editing with Eric (talk) 12:59, 9 February 2020 (UTC)
- Given that the topic is "Monarchy of the United Kingdom", it would not be appropriate to mention here either Head of the Church of England (it is discussed in the section on 'Religious role'), or Head of the Commonwealth (mentioned in 4th paragraph) which is a position not attached to the hereditary monarchy of the UK as such, and depends on recognition on the part of the Commonwealth countries, both realms and republics. By contrast, C-in-C is a major attribute of the UK monarchy, and the royal prerogative is an essential attribute of the UK constitutional monarchy, and is as well mentioned as other linked items that are not self-explanatory such as "immediate family " and "bestowing honours". Qexigator (talk) 20:02, 9 February 2020 (UTC)
- I think it would be helpful to let others make their comments without interference; we've both said quite a lot already. A.D.Hope (talk) 23:59, 9 February 2020 (UTC)
Discussion
[edit]Archive review
[edit]For the information of contributors proposing to participate in this RfC: given that the article has been starred as "featured" for over ten years, and the content of what is now paragraph 2 in the current version has remained practically unchanged in that period, it would be helpful to review the Talk Archive and see whether or not the content of paragraph 2 had previously been considered within the past 10 years (say from 2009), on the assumption that points earlier discussed by participating editors had by then been settled. In fact, the are no more than 3 Archives, running from December 2004 to November 2009:
- Archive 1: December 2004-April 2007[30]
- Archive 2 May 2007-July 2007[31]
- Archive 3: July 2007-November 2009[32]
This RfC is on the current Talk page (begins May 2010). Qexigator (talk) 10:04, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
Featured article
[edit]It will be helpful to contributors proposing to participate in this RfC to mention that the panel at the top of this Talk page links to the Featured article review of October 2008. [33]. The version of the 2nd paragraph set out there is practically the same as the current version, except that the current version adds reference to diplomatic duties and to the monarch as C-in-C, and ends with a short sentence The Government of the United Kingdom is known as Her (His) Majesty's Government. Qexigator (talk) 10:04, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
+ commander-in-chief was added in March 2012.[34]
- Although this might provide some context I would raise few points,
- Nothing is permanently settled on Wikipedia; Wikipedia is constantly evolving and consensus changes.
- If the proposed paragraph is in an improvement, editors should see that, consensus will change, and it will be incorporated.
- Just because the article is Featured, doesn't mean it isn't flawed and no improvements can be made. (FA's are frequently demoted).
- I would suggest re-reading the Wikipedia policy, Wikipedia:Consensus to contributors who regard consensus as permanent. Editing with Eric (talk) 12:04, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
- Yes, it will be helpful if contributors participating in this RfC note EwE's above comment. Qexigator (talk) 12:50, 10 February 2020 (UTC)
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