Talk:Monday (The X-Files)/GA1
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Reviewer: DAP388 (talk · contribs) 20:44, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
Will review the article tomorrow. —DAP388 (talk) 20:44, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
Just a few comments:
- "'Monday' earned a Nielsen household rating of 10.2 and was watched by 16.7 million people in its initial broadcast." The flow is a bit choppy here. Put the number in front of Nielsen.
- "In this episode, the world is trapped in a time loop, and only one woman seems to know." Who is this woman? If possibly please specify her name.
- "Mulder's paycheck and envelope were created after several calls to the J. Edgar Hoover Building." Specify Washington, D.C. as its location.
- Season Six -> season six. Wikilink the show's sixth season to it as well.
That's it. On hold for seven days. —DAP388 (talk) 18:20, 3 March 2012 (UTC)