Talk:Moog for Love/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:53, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• Good!

Lead

• "The three-track record was released on 15 June 2016 by the labels Island and PMR records." --> "The three-track record was released on 15 June 2016 by the labels Island and PMR Records."
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 02:16, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Production

• "Regardless, the duo wanted to release a record for the summer, reasoning that the duo felt "strange" not issuing any material to the public in that season.[3]" --> "Regardless, the duo wanted to release a record for the summer, reasoning that they felt "strange" not issuing any material to the public in that season.[3]" (Just to cut back on the usage of "the duo".)
  • Whoops! Fixed editorEهեইдအ😎 02:16, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Composition

Paragraph 1

• "Feel Like I Do," --> "Feel Like I Do", (song title reasoning.)
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 02:16, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Paragraph 2

• Great!

Release and promotion

• "First available for streaming 14 June 2016,[10] PMR and Island Records released Moog for Love for digital download the next day,[11] and the EP garnered generally positive reviews upon its distribution, some reviewers calling it siginificantly better than Caracal.[10][12]" --> I'd separate these two statements please
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 02:16, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Track listing and credits

• Suggestion: "All tracks written, mixed, and produced by Guy Lawrence, and mastered by Lewis Hopkin. Additional writing and production credits are noted.[13]" --> "All tracks written, mixed, and produced by Guy Lawrence, and mastered by Lewis Hopkin; additional writing and production credits are noted.[13]"
  • Done editorEهեইдအ😎 02:16, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

Release history

• No sources
  • Added citation editorEهեইдအ😎 02:16, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

End of GA Review:

Great work! I love reviewing your articles! Thanks so much! On hold for seven days; good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:00, 26 June 2016 (UTC).

• @Carbrera: All issues have been addressed. I'm also glad you enjoy reading my articles. editorEهեইдအ😎 02:17, 26 June 2016 (UTC)