Talk:Moral blindness/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:16, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:16, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Basic stuff and comments[edit]

  • "after events" → "after the events"
  • "wide ranging" → "wide-ranging"
  • Add a serial comma after "ethical fading" in the lead.
  • Milgram and Zimbardo → Stanley Milgram and Philip Zimbardo
  • "for deportation" → "for the deportation"
  • The last paragraph in #Overview needs a source.
  • Add serial commas after "judgements" and "Hume".
  • Evil [4] → Evil[4]
  • "good"[12] → "good".[12]
  • 18th century [9][10][11] → 18th century[9][10][11]
  • trolley problem. [13] → trolley problem.[13]
  • The last two sentences from #In_psychology need sources.
  • "research focus" → "research focused"
  • "developed upon to" → "developed to"
  • "ZImbardo" → "Zimbardo"
  • nature"” → nature"
  • Add serial commas after "individual, situational", "politics", and "business ethics".
  • Add columns to the #See_also section.
  • With all that in mind, references are in good shape.

Progress[edit]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thank you so much for your review of the page. I really appreciate the feedback and comments. I've made changes to the page in response to them so do let me know if anything looks amiss and if I need to make any other changes. Again, thank you for the time you put into this! Rianahen (talk) 23:14, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Buidhe: Sorry about that! I've been away for a bit but will be on top of the page from now on. Rianahen (talk) 23:14, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Rianahen: Looks great! Only things needed before I pass are removing the space between #See also and #References and fixing the link in the lead of [[Philip Zimbardo|Philip Zimbardo)]] to [[Philip Zimbardo]] (with the ")" outside as well). Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:22, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Yeay! Noted and done! Thank you! Rianahen (talk) 23:42, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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