Talk:Movin' Out (Brian's Song)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 talk 14:56, 30 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I will review. Ruby2010 talk 14:56, 30 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Comments[edit]

...who praised it for having continuous storyline I think a word is missing

Done

MacFarlane responded, saying that they had made fun of Family Guy several times, to which the executives replied that they want to "end the feud". Some tense issues. Do you mean "they wanted to"...?

Done

Indicate who James L Brooks is in relation to the show (add [executive producer] to the quote for instance if he holds that particular position).

Done

There is a dab link that needs to be fixed

Done

The article just needs a few small tweaks, and it will be ready to go. I'll place the review on hold for seven days while it gets sorted out (although the GA drive ends tomorrow, so it would be nice if you made the necessary changes beforehand to help the project's stats). Thanks, Ruby2010 talk 16:13, 30 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

All the errors are fixed. Pancake (talk) 16:37, 30 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Nice work! Ruby2010 talk 16:45, 30 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]