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Hey Daniel, this topic seems to be very interesting, looking forward to reading once it is done.
What does the article (or section) do well?
- The content table is very detailed and encompasses all aspects of the story. The lead paragraph is precise and informative. The points listed in other parts are very promising and do have a good flow.
What changes would you suggest overall?
- I would expand the lead paragraph just a bit and provide sources for facts about killing, trial and any other fact that is connected to the story because there's only one source listed in the first paragraph.
Also, I would recommend adding pictures to the article, any photos connected to people and documents, it will make the article even more interesting.
NinoChikovani (talk) 18:10, 17 October 2019 (UTC)NinoChikovani
