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Reviewer: Georgejdorner (talk · contribs) 03:40, 4 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments: I ran the software for checking disambiguation links, copyright violation, and for link rot. Only item noted was that cite (1) is a dead link.Georgejdorner (talk) 03:40, 4 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments on text:

Further comments: Despite the carping above, this is an impressive bit of work on recent events. I would love to see it improved into a Good Article, if only for its timeliness.Georgejdorner (talk) 04:06, 4 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Second reading:

SUPPORT as Good Article. Nominator has shown talent in making speedy and meaningful changes to improve the article. Nominator has also shown laudable sensitivity in reporting this murder of an abused and muddled child.Georgejdorner (talk) 01:59, 5 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for overseeing this GAR Georgejdorner, you did a really good job of reviewing the article with an applaudible thoroughness. Best, Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:40, 5 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Georgejdorner, I'm just wondering if you have gotten a little confused between the GA and FA systems here. Offering "support" for an article is something that goes on at FA; at GA there is a different procedure, which you can familiarise yourself with here. The article won't actually pass as a GA until you actively mark it out as such. All the best, and thank you once again! Midnightblueowl (talk) 17:24, 8 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry. I never before passed an article for GA. Here you go.Georgejdorner (talk) 18:00, 8 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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