Talk:My Chick Bad/GA2
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:13, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Not one of Nicki's best songs, IMO, but good work by you! I'll put the review on hold for now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 10:02, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- "Produced by The Legendary Traxster, the song serves as the second single from his seventh album..." reads like it is The Legendary Traxster's album
- Done
- "The song was a commercial success, peaking at eleven on" → number eleven
- Done
- Similarly number two on the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs
Background[edit]
- "The official remix features Eve, Trina, & Diamond, Ludacris only has background vocals." → The official remix features Eve, Trina, and Diamond, while Ludacris appears with only background vocals.
- Done
- "The remix was also included on the album..." This is the first section, so you should reintroduce the title of the album
- Maybe imply Luda[cris] in Eve's quote?
Composition[edit]
Please trim File:Mychickbad.ogg to 21.5 seconds. If you prefer I will trim it if you tell me what to trim (I recommend a bit off each end).- "Nathan Rabin of The A.V. Club described the song as "swaggering", as it has been called "rambunctious" by XXL" as→and
- Done.
- Citation for references to Williams sisters?
Critical reception[edit]
- "XXL said, Minaj's turn at the song.." no need for comma after 'said'
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- Last two sentences need attention.
- Some user added that false review, removed.
Chart performance[edit]
- Italicise Billboard
- Done
- "After its release to radio followed by increasing digital sales" comma needed after 'radio'
- Done
- As the song is no longer on any BB charts, you will need to remove this from the paragraph, and replace the current reference with [1] (this doesn't reference any appearance on R&B/Hip-Hop Songs, though).
- Replaced with Allmusic
- Every chart position should be preceded by 'number' (eg number forty-six). You seem to have done this throughout the article, so you may have a reason. If so, please dispute this comment!
- Well usually it depends on the user reviewing and sometimes I've been in reviews that allow so sometimes I forget.
- "Although the song never officially went for adds on mainstream airplay" → Although the song was never officially added to mainstream airplay. Is there a reference for this (I doubt there is, but maybe a critic has remarked on this too)?
Music video[edit]
- The top half of the image is fine, but does the bottom frame of the video add anything? It needs to be discussed somewhere, but I don't really see what is notable about that frame. You also misspelled Freddy Krueger in the caption.
- "Two clips were filmed the original and for the remix." - rewrite
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- "Nicki Minaj plays a stylish Freddy Krueger" 'stylish'? Sounds POV.
- "Eve, Trina, and Diamond, make cameos near the end of the video." Reference? No comma needed after 'Diamond'
- Done
- You mention what Minaj does in the video in both paragraphs
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- "before The video ends with" - lower case 'the'
- Done
- Last sentence needs a rewrite
Charts[edit]
- Maybe retitle this as 'Charts and certifications', remove sub-heading, and {{col-2}} the section?
References[edit]
- Link The Washington Post and Radio & Records
- Done.
- Radio & Records still needs to be linked. Adabow (talk · contribs) 02:16, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
- Done.