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GA Review

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Reviewer: XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 05:44, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Prose
Lead
  • The infobox should state the album was released October 7 as the standard is to just list earliest release date.
  •  Done
Background
  • "which is executive produced by Kanye West"..... this sounds awkward, try something like "which Kanye West produced".
  • "In July 2012, the Virginia native" and "the Virginia rapper" would read better as just "Pusha T" or "the rapper".
  • "Hip Hop Since 1987" should be italicized, linked with a URL, or have quotation marks. Otherwise it looks like he was speaking on the matter since 1987.
  • The "pain" in "Actually, there is a line in "Pain" where I say 'My name is my name', that line comes" should have ' rather than ".
  •  Done
Release and promotion
  • Per MOS:PUNCT and MOS:QUOTEMARKS, there are some uses of curly quotation marks/apostrophes in the third paragraph after the quote which should be replaced with straight apostrophes. i.e. ’ → '
  •  Done
Critical response
  • Again, curly apostrophes/quotation marks that should be replaced with straight ones. All three paragraphs of the section.
  •  Done
Accolades
  • Once more, curly punctuation should be replaced with straight punctuation. Both paragraphs of the section.
  •  Done
Track listing
  • Names of people involved only need to be stated in full once.
  •  Done
Sourcing
  • No problems here
Coverage
  • The "Commercial performance" section should be expanded. I would recommend a total of at least three paragraphs.
  • @XXSNUGGUMSXX: Due to there not being much commercial success of the album, there is not really much to comment or report. It only received in-depth coverage on the US sales, which are covered as much as they can and all international chart positions are already stated. STATic message me! 21:14, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  •  Done
Neutrality
  • No problems here
Stability
  • No problems here

GA Pass

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Good work fixing this up! I'm passing. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 23:31, 11 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]