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Good articleMy Truth has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
July 28, 2015Good article nomineeListed
May 10, 2018Good topic candidatePromoted
December 30, 2019Guild of Copy EditorsCopyedited
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:34, 8 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Comments a really good piece of work this.

  • Five sentences starting "Robyn co-wrote all fourteen songs ..." are quite "factoid", they don't flow so well, any chance you could consider merging a couple of them to enhanace the readability?
  • Same comment applies to the Composition section, e.g. "David Schmader of The Stranger opined that it features a directness that is "unprecedented in pop".[13] Schmader compared its piano..." could easily become "David Schmader of The Stranger opined that it features a directness that is "unprecedented in pop",[13] and compared its piano..."  Done
  • "sixth months " six months.  Done
  • ""Electric" was released as My Truth‍‍ '​‍s lead single on 29 April 1999.[20] The CD single included both the radio edit and the extended album version.[21] The single became Robyn's third top-ten entry on the Sverigetopplistan singles chart,..." "single" used four times in quick succession, consider a reword or merger to reduce the repetitiveness.  Done
  • ""Play" managed to peak at" -> ""Play" peaked at..."  Done
  • Should Joyzine be italicised?
  • "brilliant " is this a quote? If not it's a little POV, if so please "quote" it.
  • "Lucas did review the album on behalf of AllMusic.[8] Lucas wrote" either "He wrote..." or merge, "Lucas did review the album on behalf of AllMusic,[8] writing..."  Done
  • "Swedish Recording Industry Association (GLF) for sales of 40,000" you've already abbreviated the GLF, so just use the abbreviation rather than explaining it again.  Done
  • Any reason to make the "Certifications" table sortable when it contains precisely one entry?

As I said, excellent stuff, I'll put it on hold while these minor issues are looked into. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:31, 9 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your review and your kind words! I will begin dealing with these issues in a day or two. Pretty busy at the moment! Pancake (talk) 16:04, 11 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Good work, sorry it's taken a while to get back to you. I'm happy to pass this as a Good Article. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:50, 28 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]