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  • 1) Move most of the early education/bio info into another section titled "Early Life and Education". The lead section should briefly mention - who is he, what he is famous for, the most prominent awards won.
  • 2) The Chandrayan I section has been copied from its wikipedia article with its cite notes in text form like [2] and [7]. This section needs to be edited to 1)remove all cite notes in text form 2)to provide a main article link to Chandrayaan-1 3) citations in correct format
  • 3)Reduce the number of external links - they are longer than the article -incorporate the Facts from them into the article with them as citations
  • 4) The "public forum award" section could be trimmed - the various rotary circle/tamil sangam awards could be eliminated. Instead a single line could be inserted that "he has been honoured by various local organisations as well". By putting them in the same category as "ananda vikatan"/"kumudham"/ NDTV/Makkal tv/Kalvi malar reduces the importance of the later. Here you could add the popular acclaim he has received in Tamil Nadu. probably many of the external links information (like letter from karunanidhi) can be worked into here.
  • 5)wikilinks to various universities and academic bodies in the "academic awards" section
  • 6)"Dr. Annadurai's publications and works are being widely referred by satellite operator's" - this sentence looks odd and uncited. either remove it or rephrase and Cite it
  • 7) "one of his work has been referred in a US patent" - change reference to proper citation format
  • 8) The "previous assignments" section should be made up of prose instead of a bulleted timeline. Prose is always better.
  • 9) To summarize. The article has a long way to go - trim the lead; add a new "early life and education" section; properly format chandrayan I with annadurai's role in it; add wikilinks to all academic and professional bodies.; reduce the public forum awards to the most prominent ones - eliminate rotary circles and tamil sangams; previous assignments sections to be converted to prose.; trim external links and incorporate their info into article with them as references.--Sodabottle (talk) 04:09, 10 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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