Talk:Neighborhoods (Blink-182 album)/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 06:02, 27 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

No reason this should be on GAN for so long! I'll review this.

First, source for where it was recorded?
Opening sentence should probably be "was" not "is"
Source for release date?
What is "The band's studio autonomy"?
You mention the recording starting in February 2009 after the band's reunion... twice in the lead. Any way to cut out one of them?
"Despite this, Neighborhoods did not connect on the same scale as earlier releases and the band would depart from Interscope the following fall. " - what does it mean "connect on the same scale"
"and a fatal plane crash involving Barker" - this implies Barker died. You should clarify that ASAP he wasn't killed. Also, is it worth mentioning where the crash happened?
"DeLonge found out via the TV news at an airport while waiting to board a flight." - the news of the crash? Or the rumor of the reunion? The wording could be clearer.
"One was 'Do you remember who we were?' and the other was 'This is who I am now,' " DeLonge says. "It was a good moment to put the shit aside." - is the quote needed?
"The album sessions will be partially documented in The Blinkumentary" - is this still forthcoming?
Watch for overlinking in "Touring and aftermath" section
Should you add in the aftermath section that as of 2014, they're working on a new album?

All in all, pretty good article! This shouldn't be too difficult to take care of. Lemme know if there are questions. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 06:02, 27 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]