Talk:Nevada State Route 28/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 13:42, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

I will review this article later today. TCN7JM 13:42, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

1. The lead is unusually dry. Most, if not all other road articles I've seen nominated at GAN have the termini mentioned in the lead, while this one doesn't. It also doesn't seem to say enough about the history. Stuff like when the highway was first designated as a state route and when it was designated as a scenic byway are important enough for the lead, but are nowhere to be found.
   •  Done, added more things.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 19:31, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
2. The third sentence of the route description doesn't make any sense. I'd tell you how to reword it, but I'm not sure what it's supposed to mean.
   • Possibly done, I reworded it slightly.—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 19:31, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
3. You should mention the names of the scenic byways that SR 28 was designated as a part of in the history.
   •  Done—CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 19:12, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

I will put this article on hold for you to fix these issues. TCN7JM 13:53, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

Alright, it looks fine to me now. I will pass the article. TCN7JM 05:55, 16 August 2013 (UTC)