Talk:Nicola Paone

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I did remove the "unreviewed" template. A couple caveats:

• Removing it is not confirmation that everything is OK. My hurdle is to check to see that it meets some minimal guidelines: has some sourcing, is acceptably organized, and the like. My removal of the template doesn't provide any "protection" against any other editor who might identify problems.
• I specifically noted that the image used in the article matches the one used in one of the references. This is normally a red flag. I see that the image does include the appropriate copyright claim, but I am explicitly not taking the next step and ensuring that the person granting the license has the right to do so. I assume there are editors roving about looking into issues such as this, and it isn't my forte.
• I see a number of statement that could use a citation. I think that many of the facts, such as birth date, are probably covered in the NYT obituary, but I cannot access that file at the moment. It would be wise to add a reference tot he first paragraph. It is generally considered acceptable (I think) to have a reference at the end of a paragraph covering facts in the paragraph, but a paragraph removed its too far away.--SPhilbrickT 23:15, 29 September 2010 (UTC)