Talk:No. 4 Elementary Flying Training School RAAF/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: AustralianRupert (talk · contribs) 09:14, 20 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments: G'day, overall I believe this meets the criteria. I have the following comments/suggestions: AustralianRupert (talk) 09:32, 20 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

the Earwig tool didn't detect any copyright violations (no action required);
there is one dead link that might need adjusting: [1]
- Tks, missed that one.
suggest wikiliking: "officer" and "airman"
- Done.
the article seems well referenced, using reliable sources (no action required);
coverage seems fine given the unit's brief existence and non combat role (no action required);
"No. 4 EFTS's graduates had included Clive Caldwell, who become Australia's top-scoring fighter ace of World War II" --> " No. 4 EFTS's graduates included Clive Caldwell, who became Australia's top-scoring fighter ace of World War II".
- Heh, the "had" was deliberate (though not necessary, I agree) but the "become" was just a good old-fashioned typo -- tks for spotting! Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 11:21, 20 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
images seem appropriately licenced and captioned (no action required)
article seems stable (no action required).
- Tks for taking the time to review, Rupert. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 11:21, 20 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  - No worries, Ian, good work as usual. I am happy that the article meets the GA criteria. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 12:33, 20 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]