The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Indonesian historian and minister of education Nugroho Notosusanto(pictured) had a film-writing credit?
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"Professor" and "Brigadier General" shouldn't be titles toghether, as it's confusing to the layman that "Professor Brigadier General" isn't a rank.
How would you organise it? Professor second? Choosing one or the other would be OR, I believe. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:04, 12 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Despite wanting to remain in the military, influence by his father he continued his education," something is wrong with this sentence.
"... he finished his senior high school eduction, despite wanting to continue with the Army." -- no caps on "Army" here.
Debatable, as it could mean the Indonesian Army as an institution (see various articles on the US Army for examples). Decapped though. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:04, 12 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"the University of Indonesia (Universitas Indonesia, or UI)" if it is a non-english term it should be italicized.
"By the early 1960s Notosusanto had abandoned his literary career, focusing instead on history." -- this is sort of an abrupt transition. What prompted this?
None of the sources say explicitly, although he clearly had much greater interest in history than literature. I've rearranged the section to make it a bit more evident. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:21, 12 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"as a modern museum showcasing the military's role." -- its role in what?
