Talk:OS T1000/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 16:40, 16 November 2009 (UTC)
Comments:

1. "and scrapped the following", add "year" after "following".
2. "The background was the plans to connect the eastern and western networks" sounds awkward.
3. The sentence "They received a new front, the doors moved and the train equipped with a pantograph." sounds awkward.
4. In the History section, you have "Oslo Tramway" linked twice. Can you delink the second instance?
5. "The Røa Line was finished upgraded"? Either finished or upgraded should be removed.
6. In the first paragraph of the Specifications section, you begin three sentences with "Each car". Can you change at least one of them?

I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 16:40, 16 November 2009 (UTC)

Done. Thank you for the review :) Arsenikk ^(talk) 20:10, 16 November 2009 (UTC)

I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 21:12, 17 November 2009 (UTC)