Talk:Olivia (Olivia album)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Azealia911 (talk · contribs) 21:06, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Full review coming soon. Azealia911 _talk 21:06, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much! Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 30 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Azealia911: Any news on the status of this review? Aoba47 (talk) 05:39, 12 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Apologies for the delay, I'll be getting to this as soon as I can! Azealia911 _talk 05:38, 13 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Azealia911: No worries, take as much time as you need! I hope I did not come across as rude. Just wanted to check in :-). Aoba47 (talk) 05:57, 13 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Oh of course not! It's been over two weeks since I opened the review so it's completely understandable, I'm just a little rushed off my feet at the moment, the review will definitely be posted before the end of this weekend :) Azealia911 _talk 06:04, 13 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Azealia911: Thank you! And good luck with everything that is keeping you busy :) Aoba47 (talk) 06:12, 13 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Azealia911: Just let me know if there's anything really obviously wrong about the page. I am still new to Wikipedia so I appreciate any feedback. Aoba47 (talk) 21:53, 17 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Azealia911: Also, let me know if you think any images or audio samples should be added to the page. Thank you again! Aoba47 (talk) 07:34, 19 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

How do you know it was recorded "2000–2001"? Done There is not much info on this album so I couldn't find anything to support this so I simply removed it.
If "dirty south" isn't sourced within the body of the article, remove it. Done Removed this
The lead is too short for my liking for a good article, comparing it to Yeezus or Bangerz. Look at what they include and apply to this article, talk about singles, the albums's sound, where performed songs live.

@Azealia911: I will work on this; just remember that this article is much shorter than the two you referenced as there is not as much material about it (and there was not much exposure/promotion in comparison to those two) Aoba47 (talk) 07:00, 18 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Done Thank you for providing me with examples. I have expanded the lead so that is much more informative. Let me know if it needs more expansion. Aoba47 (talk) 07:19, 18 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"Producer Joshua Thompson produced" → "Musician Joshua Thompson producerd" Done
I think you've made an error with italics after "The Morning Call" Done
"reflected that" → "reflecting that" Done
The last paragraph of this section is to quote-y, you can easily take the quotes and paraphrase them instead of injecting a quote into each sentence. Done