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GA Review

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Hi, this will be my first GA review ever. I saw it had been sitting here for well over a month so I figured I'd help you out.

Good article, I don't have too many issues with it, but here are the couple problems I see.

Thanks for reviewing, and for the positive approach :) --

Nudve (talk) 14:24, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • I added a couple of fact tags where I thought there should be a citation. Cite 'em.
I just reverted you. All of those are cited in the following ref. If an entire paragraph is supported by one ref, must I repeat it at the end of each sentence? -- Nudve (talk) 14:24, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yekutiel Adam is mentioned but it is not mentioned who he is. Because he is a General you should say something along the lines of "Yekutiel Adam, an Israeli General......"
 Done -- Nudve (talk) 14:24, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sharon flew back to Jerusalem to attend a Cabinet meeting on Wednesday, June 9. He said Syria had already begun moving its second armored division (the Third Division) south from Ein Zahalta, which meant that this was the time to act.-What makes this the time to act? Why does it matter?
 Done -- Nudve (talk) 14:24, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • ISraeli? I assume it should be Israeli.
 Done -- Nudve (talk) 14:24, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

After you make these improvements I will pass it.-Kieran4 (talk) 14:04, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again. Cheers, Nudve (talk) 14:24, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Oh alright, I just thought it'd be better with the citation right after those sentences, where the events are listed. But that wasn't a big issue. I'll pass it to GA, all I have to do now it figure out how in the name of God I can get this onto the talk page. I'm having troubles with my first GA Review, as you can see.-Kieran4 (talk) 14:47, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
No problem :) -- Nudve (talk) 15:05, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

A contemporary picture of Sharon

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Two weeks before the war. May be more appropriate. Valleyofdawn (talk) 16:46, 12 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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