Talk:Ottoman ironclad Hamidiye/GA1

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:04, 19 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:04, 19 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • No Copyvio checkY
  • No DAB links checkY
  • No Dead links checkY

Prose suggestions[edit]

  • "Her very lengthy construction period left her obsolete" perhaps "Due to her lengthy construction period, she was already obsolete by the time she was launched"
    • Works for me. Thanks for another review. Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 20 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Parsecboy: That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 21:22, 19 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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