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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:08, 12 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 12:08, 12 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a checkY
    1.b checkY
  • 2
    2.a checkY
    2.b checkY
    2.c checkY
    2.d checkY
  • 3
    3.a checkY
    3.b checkY
  • 4
    4.a checkY
  • 5
    5.a checkY
  • 6
    6.a checkY
    6.b checkY
  • No Copyvio checkY
  • No DAB links checkY
  • No Dead links checkY

Prose suggestions[edit]

  • "The design for Iclaliye was based on the earlier Asar-i Şevket-class ironclads built in France, though she carried a slightly more powerful armament consisting of two 228 mm" Perhaps "which were built in France" would work better.
  • That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 01:38, 17 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]