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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 12:20, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Seems like an interesting topic, will start soon. AryKun (talk) 12:20, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

See Kablammo's note below.
  • "she began to encounter a storm" → "she encountered a storm"
  • Link wreck.
  • Link for Official number?
  • Link piston, bore, and stroke.
  • Link stern and forward deck.
  • "S.W. Dorsey" → "S. W. Dorsey"
  • "daughter, and his own" → comma unnecessary
  • Flour and kegs don't need links.
  • Link bow anchor.
  • "shore, and one of the group died of exposure" → "and" seems like an inappropriate conjunction here, maybe "although" or something else might be better.
  • "had, passed" → "had passed,"
  • "As of 2020 the" → "As of 2020, the"
  • "The Great Lakes Shipwreck Preservation Society planned to search for her on June 27–28, 2020, and if not found, they planned to search for her on September 12–13." → "The Great Lakes Shipwreck Preservation Society planned to search for her from June 27–28, 2020, and if she was not found, again from September 12–13."
  • Not necessary, but alt text for both images would be nice.
@AryKun: Done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 22:08, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Nice, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 03:26, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Use of the definite article before a ship's name

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See this discussion. The definite article is not required, but is accepted, unless the ship has an HM prefix. Kablammo (talk) 15:24, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]