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GA Review

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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 17:04, 27 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to start the review. It may take 1 day to a week. Thanks, TheQ Editor (Talk) 17:04, 27 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Review

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes

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Well written
  • at one point holding both titles concurrently. When exactly?
  • Added.
  • She grew up with her father, Ricky Knight and her mother, Sweet Saraya, who unintentionally wrestled while she was seven months pregnant-change to She grew up with her father, (Roy Bevis) and her mother, (Julia Hamer-Bevis) who unintentionally wrestled while she was seven months pregnant
  • Roy Bevis is his brother. Changed Sweet Saraya to Julia Hamer-Bevis.
  • in a triple threat tag team match in a loss -maybe use result in a loss
  • Fixed.
  • wikilink "World Association of Women's Wrestling" and "World Wide Wrestling League"
  • I have already searched it ahead of time. Nothing such is found.([1] & [2])
  • Knight would then allied Melodi -no would
  • Removed.
  • that much what is "that" referring too?
  • I copied that from what she said in the interview. I'm not sure how much she is getting paid. So I removed that part and fixed some tweaks.
  • WAWW British Champion, she made it all the way -no comma.
  • Fixed.
  • wikilink Sweet Saraya for the section World Association Of Wrestling and various promotions (2006–2011).
  • Wikilinked.
  • Knight with her mother - change with to and
  • Changed.
  • On October 2010, -start on new line
  • Do you mean create a paragraph? Fixed.
  • Once again, she took on her mother but this time it was for the HEW Women's Championship but her mother won. -when? and wikilink HEW Women's Championship
  • Added. Wikilinked.
  • was to be short lived -change to was short lived
  • Fixed.
  • wikilink Liberty
  • to participated -change to to participate
  • Fixed.
  • She would lose the title - She lost the title
  • Fixed.
  • Prior to the reporting to Florida Championship Wrestling -grammar issue
  • Fixed grammar. Changed to "Because she will be going to Florida Championship Wrestling (FCW)"
  • wikilink Blue Nikita
  • On the March 19 -no "the"
  • Fixed.
  • Marie on the 11 June -same thing as above
  • Fixed.
  • Paige would go on a singles winning streak -would go to went
  • Fixed.
  • On the 30 January 2013 episode of NXT -Are you saying about the episode the aired on NXT at 30 January 2013 or an actual episode called 30 January 2013
  • NXT, Raw or any WWE shows don't have a show title. They are just the dates when the show aired.
  • On the 13 February NXT change to On the Febuary 13 episode of NXT to be consistent
  • The original is the British way of writing dates. There is a maintenance template above which says "use British English".
  • Also at NXT Arrival which Paige once again retained her title against Emma -change to Also at NXT Arrival, Paige once again retained her title against Emma. Also add the date
  • Fixed. Added.
  • on 7 April 2014 episode of Raw -on 7 April 2014 to on the 7 April 2014
  • Added.
  • with Brie Bella went -change to with Brie Bella which went
Referencing
  • On May 2010, Knight with her mother challenged Amazon and Ananya for the PWF Ladies Tag Team Title which they won -unsourced
  • Added.
  • she will defend her title against Fox at Payback -when?
  • Fixed.
  • don't use ring names in the Personal Life section
  • Fixed.
Broadness
*needs to add the dates of some events described above
  • Added some.
NPOV


Stability


Images
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