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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 17:04, 27 May 2014 (UTC)
I'm going to start the review. It may take 1 day to a week. Thanks, TheQ Editor (Talk) 17:04, 27 May 2014 (UTC)
Review
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
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Notes
[edit]- Well written
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at one point holding both titles concurrently. When exactly?
- Added.
- She grew up with her father, Ricky Knight and her mother, Sweet Saraya, who unintentionally wrestled while she was seven months pregnant-change to She grew up with her father, (Roy Bevis) and her mother, (Julia Hamer-Bevis) who unintentionally wrestled while she was seven months pregnant
- Roy Bevis is his brother. Changed Sweet Saraya to Julia Hamer-Bevis.
- in a triple threat tag team match in a loss -maybe use result in a loss
- Fixed.
- wikilink "World Association of Women's Wrestling" and "World Wide Wrestling League"
- Knight would then allied Melodi -no would
- Removed.
- that much what is "that" referring too?
- I copied that from what she said in the interview. I'm not sure how much she is getting paid. So I removed that part and fixed some tweaks.
- WAWW British Champion, she made it all the way -no comma.
- Fixed.
- wikilink Sweet Saraya for the section World Association Of Wrestling and various promotions (2006–2011).
- Wikilinked.
- Knight with her mother - change with to and
- Changed.
- On October 2010, -start on new line
- Do you mean create a paragraph? Fixed.
- Once again, she took on her mother but this time it was for the HEW Women's Championship but her mother won. -when? and wikilink HEW Women's Championship
- Added. Wikilinked.
- was to be short lived -change to was short lived
- Fixed.
- wikilink Liberty
- Nothing is found. ([3]) FairyTailRocks 04:15, 28 May 2014 (UTC)
- to participated -change to to participate
- Fixed.
- She would lose the title - She lost the title
- Fixed.
- Prior to the reporting to Florida Championship Wrestling -grammar issue
- Fixed grammar. Changed to "Because she will be going to Florida Championship Wrestling (FCW)"
- wikilink Blue Nikita
- Nothing is found. ([4]) FairyTailRocks 04:35, 28 May 2014 (UTC)
- On the March 19 -no "the"
- Fixed.
- Marie on the 11 June -same thing as above
- Fixed.
- Paige would go on a singles winning streak -would go to went
- Fixed.
- On the 30 January 2013 episode of NXT -Are you saying about the episode the aired on NXT at 30 January 2013 or an actual episode called 30 January 2013
- NXT, Raw or any WWE shows don't have a show title. They are just the dates when the show aired.
- On the 13 February NXT change to On the Febuary 13 episode of NXT to be consistent
- The original is the British way of writing dates. There is a maintenance template above which says "use British English".
- Also at NXT Arrival which Paige once again retained her title against Emma -change to Also at NXT Arrival, Paige once again retained her title against Emma. Also add the date
- Fixed. Added.
- on 7 April 2014 episode of Raw -on 7 April 2014 to on the 7 April 2014
- Added.
- with Brie Bella went -change to with Brie Bella which went
- Referencing
- On May 2010, Knight with her mother challenged Amazon and Ananya for the PWF Ladies Tag Team Title which they won -unsourced
- Added.
- she will defend her title against Fox at Payback -when?
- Fixed.
- don't use ring names in the Personal Life section
- Fixed.
- Remove the twitter external link for Paige. See Wikipedia:Twitter#Twitter
- Removed. FairyTailRocks 04:44, 28 May 2014 (UTC)
- Broadness
*needs to add the dates of some events described aboveAdded some.
- NPOV
- Stability
- Images
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Please describe the image in the infobox with more detail.
Added WP:ALT in the infobox as well to the other images. FairyTailRocks 13:36, 28 May 2014 (UTC)