Talk:Park Crescent, Brighton/GA1
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Reviewer: Malleus Fatuorum 16:55, 15 November 2010 (UTC)
- History
- "A road, Union Road, was built from east to west connecting the two main roads". Which two main roads are these? The roads to Lewes and to London mentioned in the previous paragraph?
- "... the spectators' reaction was so unimpressed that he had to escape into the maze to get away from them". This isn't quite right. It's not the reaction that was unimpressed but the spactators.
- Images
- File:Salvation Army CH, Brighton 01.JPG is missing author details. All the other images look OK.
- Should be OK now, Hassocks, the main writer of the article is the owner of the photo.. Thanks Malleus.♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:48, 16 November 2010 (UTC)
- Just to say that I have made changes as follows: the Union Road sentence becomes Union Road was built from east to west connecting the London and Lewes Roads, and the spectators themselves are now unimpressed. The Salvation Army congress hall pic is indeed one of mine, and it looks like Dr B. has sorted out the attribution template. Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 19:23, 16 November 2010 (UTC)
- OK that's great. We can wrap this up now. Malleus Fatuorum 19:30, 16 November 2010 (UTC)
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