Talk:Patrick White (ice hockey)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Hello. YellowMonkey (vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 07:42, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
- Comprehensiveness
- Some of the articles referenced have information on his childhood and beginnings. Why isn't this in the article?
- Added a section about it.
- Articles also discuss his playing style. Again
- Included
- Sourcing
- Last parts of the UoM section are unsourced.
- All taken care of.
YellowMonkey (vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 07:42, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
- Everything should be covered now. Kaiser matias (talk) 00:42, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
- Well the sources and prose etc are fine, so I passed it YellowMonkey (vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 01:35, 15 April 2010 (UTC)