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Reviewer: Dwaipayanc (talk · contribs) 15:39, 25 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Doing...--Dwaipayan (talk) 15:39, 25 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment.
  • "The generals are kidnapped, and in several cases killed, in front of their families, while later the captured generals are tortured while the communists dance around a bonfire." This sentence does not sound well-structured, with two "while"s.
  • "Director Monty Tiwa likewise praised the film's shorts..." Is that the word (shorts) that you intended? I do not have the technical knowledge to understand if "shorts" mean something in filming parlance.--Dwaipayan (talk) 16:15, 25 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yes, I agree that cast section is not mandatory. I was merely asking if you would consider such a section, since that often help in easy navigating for the readers. They can refer back to cast section if needed, when encountering a particular actor/character's name in some other section. However, this is not necessary, and of course not a ga requirement.--Dwaipayan (talk) 15:32, 26 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • If I'm able to get ahold of a copy where the credits are actually legible (the one I have is in p***-poor shape) I can consider that. Haven't found anything more in RSes than what's in the article already. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:56, 26 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • It's currently not even an FA requirement. What do you think needs improvement? I have changed the alt text for the pictures and made them more or less like the example at WP:ALTTEXT (neither is used to describe the person in question, so describing them is not necessary) — Crisco 1492 (talk)

I will resume the ga review soon. Regards.--Dwaipayan (talk) 15:32, 26 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]