Talk:Peter Hall (RNZAF officer)

Peter Hall (RNZAF officer) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: September 29, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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B class review[edit]

@Zawed: B class. Good work. Please rewrite the following sentence so it's more obvious that Hall destroyed the Ju 88. "A few nights later, another Ju 88 was destroyed in the same area." If it were up to me, I'd move the photo to the infobox with the caption, "Hall shot down eight enemy aircraft while flying a de Havilland Mosquito." But I'll let you decide since flying ace articles aren't my area. Djmaschek (talk) 17:40, 2 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]