Talk:Peter de Maulay/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
A well-written article. I have only a few comments to make: Sainsf <^>Feel at home 10:21, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
- In Early life:
- where he soon became a close advisor of the king Add a citation at the end of this.
- Can we add why exactly he should be an "evil" counsellor?
- He married in 1214 Isabella Better write In 1214 he married Isabella
- Thornham had died in 1211 How can the place die? Should this be "Robert" instead?
- In Under Henry III:
- Henry III is a duplicate link
- which occurred on 17 May Add the year.
- In Treason accusations:
- In July Peter des Roches returned to England and in late July was instrumental in the clearing of Maulay from the charges of treason
- In Upavon case:
- Has Upavon been linked anywhere?
- Images: Are you sure we can use no images in the article? How about a image of Henry III?
That should be all. Good luck! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 10:21, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for the response Ealdgyth, I see no more issues with the article. This is ready for promotion. A fantastic job!