Talk:Pilotwings 64/GA1
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Reviewer: Airplaneman talk 20:08, 4 March 2010 (UTC)
Checklist & comments
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- I will copyedit myself unless I am not sure, in which case I will list the problems below for you to address:
- Under the "Gameplay" section, the lead sentence, Pilotwings 64 is a 3D flight simulator in which the player must complete a variety of missions using different airborne vehicles and aerial sports. I think it is meant to say something along the lines of Pilotwings 64 is a 3D flight simulator in which the player must complete a variety of missions using different airborne vehicles in many aerial sports events. or something. Please clarify. Airplaneman talk 20:35, 4 March 2010 (UTC)
Done — will pass. Airplaneman talk 03:32, 5 March 2010 (UTC)
- Under the "Gameplay" section, the lead sentence, Pilotwings 64 is a 3D flight simulator in which the player must complete a variety of missions using different airborne vehicles and aerial sports. I think it is meant to say something along the lines of Pilotwings 64 is a 3D flight simulator in which the player must complete a variety of missions using different airborne vehicles in many aerial sports events. or something. Please clarify. Airplaneman talk 20:35, 4 March 2010 (UTC)
- I will copyedit myself unless I am not sure, in which case I will list the problems below for you to address:
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- Checklinks fine. Sources look good. Airplaneman talk 20:35, 4 March 2010 (UTC)
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail: