Talk:Pizza Delivery (SpongeBob SquarePants)/GA1
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Reviewer: EditorE (talk · contribs) 20:10, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
- A source indicating what the original air date of the episode was would be nice.
- Any other direction credits that can be included here other than animation? I know comprehensive isn't as much of a strict thing for good articles as for featured articles, but I'm just saying.
- "is the fifth episode" since its episode 5a, change this to "is the first segment of the fifth episode"
- "The episode received positive reviews upon release." then where are the reviews "upon release", cause no of these are shown here, only those that were published 2003 or later. Upon release would be shortly before or on August 14, 1999.
- The plot section needs the character's actor name in brackets "()" to comply with Wikipedia's Manual of Style, cause I'm not seeing any throughout the section.
- But the article is an episode article meaning it's part of the SpongeBob SquarePants article. Characters should not be introduced and that's why it doesn't have a "Cast" section. See this for example.
- I would suggest that, for organization reasons, the airing and release info in the production section should be put in a separate release section.
- Any info about the episode ratings?
- None. I don't have any sources or reports about that. :\
- ref 2: ''Hogan's Alley'' --> ''[[Hogan's Alley (magazine)|Hogan's Alley]]''
- Link DVD Talk in ref 4
- Link TVShowsOnDVD.com in ref 5
- Link About.com in ref 10
- Date is missing for ref 11
I'll be happy to pass this once these issues are resolved. 和DITOREtails 20:10, 1 September 2013 (UTC)